webnovel
abrwastaken
abrwastakenLv13yr
2021-08-15 05:24

Feels a bit generic, but sufficiently different from other novels. Im eager to see where the autor will take this, the nexus idea is very interesting. Just work on your writing skills a bit, and this story willl become a great one...

Liked by 8 people

LIKE
Replies1
Abadom
AbadomAuthor

Thank you for the reply. I have found a decent enough editor to help me proof-reading my novel.

Other Reviews
LazyDragonDaoist
LazyDragonDaoistLv13
Related Stories