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Xouldrion
XouldrionLv33yr
2021-09-27 23:52

Welp this story is quite good compared to most famous fan fics where MCs just think with their... Though it has it's downsides, sometimes the dialogue gets a bit confusing at least from my standpoint and my brain just skips it all together. Overall it's quite good

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Thank you for the imput! Really. I am trying to always improve!

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