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RainySand
RainySandLv43yr
2021-10-05 14:31

5 star comments selling false hope. My motivation wasn't enough to carry me through so I dropped it getting close to the end of infinite stratos arc. And that is what I will review. Author if you gonna put a tag down please stick to it and don't bait anyone. A chapter named the world only god knows is very misleading and putting your character into infinite stratos instead of another mecha based franchise is questionable. The action and adventure aspect was quite lacking. Really hard to tell who's speaking unless you focus. Long walls of dialogue that leads nowhere. Personally I hardly cared about other characters. MC's personality never draws you in. Does the same boring stuff once reincarnated. The goddess, she's a back seat driver absolutely annoying. The author is kind of planning along and adjusting to the comments made.Good thing.Though there will be changes so keep that in mind. The writing is pretty decent than most other novels here. I gave extra points for the authors dedication. welp I'm out

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Abadom
AbadomAuthor

Thank you for being here, you pointed the same problems my editor did. My poor choice of a first-world kind of messed the first-time experience. Thank you for actually dropping a good review.

RainySand
RainySandLv4

I hardly think it's a good review. And on the contrary the world pick wasn't poor just the way the things were handled.

Abadom:Thank you for being here, you pointed the same problems my editor did. My poor choice of a first-world kind of messed the first-time experience. Thank you for actually dropping a good review.
Abadom
AbadomAuthor

I tried being faithful to the original source material, in fact, I believe I did that very well. The problem is that it can be rather awkward.

RainySand:I hardly think it's a good review. And on the contrary the world pick wasn't poor just the way the things were handled.
RainySand
RainySandLv4

Could have avoided the awkwardness if you made him old like chifuyu.

Abadom:I tried being faithful to the original source material, in fact, I believe I did that very well. The problem is that it can be rather awkward.
I_LOVE_MEGUMIN
I_LOVE_MEGUMINLv12

Is this harem ?? ?

Abadom:Thank you for being here, you pointed the same problems my editor did. My poor choice of a first-world kind of messed the first-time experience. Thank you for actually dropping a good review.
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