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Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]

Author: Maerry
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What is Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]

Read ‘Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]’ Online for Free, written by the author Maerry, This book is a Anime & Comics Fanfic, covering REINCARNATION Fanfiction, R18 Fan Fiction, COMEDY Fanfiction Net, and the synopsis is: How will the person who, in her previous world was known as the Goddess of Ice, deal with the world of Naruto?This story...

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How will the person who, in her previous world was known as the Goddess of Ice, deal with the world of Naruto? This story will loosely follow canon and will focus on how a powerful, wise, and slightly insane person will affect the story and its characters. Slightly AU Release schedule: 1 Chapter/day I am currently releasing this fanfic only on scribblehub.com and webnovel.com. If you are reading this elsewhere, it was not released by me. The early chapters had some writing and grammar mistakes, so I went over them a second time, which should have fixed most of the mistakes. The cover was commissioned by me and was created by Liilica on fiverr Also: join my discord: https://discord.gg/hSQQ9Ydthh

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DrunkenScholarHill
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Very humorous take on the entire reborn into Naruto theme. Have to say it’s a really refreshing sense of humour. Not the typical gags that have been done to death but really surprising original jokes or inspiration taken from somewhere I don’t know haha. The dialogue is great and characters really pop and aren’t cookie cutter shaped exposition or cliches. There’s a satisfying lifestyle they’re living And it’s great. No knowledge of Naruto the series but a whole bunch of outside context powers gathered through years of Xianxia living. Lots of fun situations happened and will probably happen in the future. Great stories like this send me to the authors profile in hopes they’ve written a few more stories haha. Unfortunately this is the first for this profile but hopefully it won’t be the last :)

Einstein3
Einstein3Lv13Einstein3

Usually, I do not give out pure 5 stars as there is always a little something, that sours the experience for me. This time, however, it's impossible to give anything else! Every aspect of this story is superb. The quality of writing is very nearly flawless with only a minuscule chance of even typos appearing. The development of the story leans on the canon timeline of events. The tiny changes pile up though, and somewhere in the not-so-far future, canon will be wrecked. The characters... Oh god, the characters. Usually, this is where I lower the rating, since you'll either have copied characters from canon or heavily ooc ones. Instead, you'll get a single original character, who believably influences others. That's extremely hard to pull off correctly, but it's done fantastically well here. Updating Stability. We get lot's of chapters to fuel our addiction, nuff said. World Background: Here, I do not only rate the Naruto universe, but also her home dimension. It's been deliciously vague till now. We get snippets of information, that keep us interested but not so much that it feels like an info dump, which is a hard line to toe. Well done! Overall, we get a reinvented universe, a lovable main cast and all around a good feeling while reading this book. 5 stars are very much deserved and well earned! Keep up the good work!

Bored_MC
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honestly the name and synopsis of this fic is god-awful, and despite having it in my library for a while i could never bring myself to read it cuz i figured itd be terribly disappointing, like strongest talent in naruto, but then i actually read it and even just for the comedy factor alone its great, and despite the MC being a cultivator and so obviously from a CN world, she's not 'Chinese' if you know what i mean, all in all, i read 300 chapters (400k+ words) in 3 days, once i started this i literally, and i cant express this enough, LITERALLY, did not stop reading unless to eat, sleep, or toilet breaks. i just couldnt put it down, the writing is as good as it can be, but the Dialog, OoOOooohh~~ its sooo goooood, honestly the characters feel SO real, its impossible to not be immersed, and despite how this may be difficult to believe by my review so far, but i have quite high standards, yet i love this fic, in spite of the fact that i dont really even like the plot, fics where the MC is a part of narutos generation arent really my cup off tea and yet i love this one because it is just so well written. and finally, Author-san, if youre reading this i want you to know that i spend all my time reading because i hate my life and like this i can escape into the lives of others, and i just want you to know that even if it was only for 3 days, thank you so, so much for letting me feel happy again for a bit :> TL:DR: dont let the title and synopsis deceive you, this story is amazing, at least read the first 2 chapters and you wont be able to put it down

Maerry
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Here I go shameless 5 Star review. Had this story in my head for quite some time now. I started making notes where I want this to go about two month ago and now im finally bringing it on the screen. This will have a good mix of action, comedy and a little bit of romance, while occasionaly pointing out the weirdness that is the Naruto world. Hope you enjoy it.

Orthanos
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I never thought that I would see a cultivator naruto fanfic that is worth reading. All things considered I would love to dump some PWR Stones to this fanfic. But 15k words which should of be met or maybe it needs ten reviews. Can you post multiple reviews for one book / fanfic?

Gilgamesh_Of_Uruk
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Let All Mongrels Who Read This Know, That This Fanfiction Has This King's Stamp Of Approval. .................................................................................................................................................

Macabreseraph
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I personally have never been a fan of fanfiction though I I find one that sounds interesting I'll always give it a shot. Sadly this falls pray to what most fanfics fall prey to in my opinion, and that's a lack of faith to the original personalities of the characters in favor of the authors portrayal in service to the story they are writing. I can accept that a new character will disrupt how events unfold, thus change the timeline a bit but I cannot accept when an author takes characters and subverts what/who they are and remakes them into someone completely different.

reboot23
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Honestly speaking, at first glance I thought this novel was a waste. I was searching for new novels, somehow saw this again and said "you know what **** it" and start to read it and let me tell you.....one of the best decisions i ever made. This novel is very funny(especially the comment sections), the story development is moving at a good pace and the writing quality is..well my brain autocorrects the mistakes so I don't think it necessary to say anything about it(only nerd *cough* I mean big brainers will say something about it)

Nan2009
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Let me start by saying, I am not a big fan of Naruto but I absolutely love this novel. Normally fanfics tend to have a tendency of having characters with bland 1D personality. But, this novel really captures their original personality with Author own unique twist on it. The character interactions are really smooth & entertaining, never once I felt bored reading it. I really like the interaction between MC and Kurama, its really fun reading their banter. Also, the romance in the novel doesn't feel rushed, it feet more natural & smooth, especially Hinata & MC interactions are really damn cute (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ) . Author-san keep up the good work ヾ (≧▽≦*) o. I really hope Author-san complete this novel properly and wouldn't drop it halfway.

Acortal
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To be fair to the author for writing this fantastic novel I should have written this review sooner. Writing Quality 5/5 It's extremely hard to see grammatical errors and even when there are some, the author is fast to fix them when the readers point them out Stability of Updates 5/5 Daily uploads and every time the author is unable to post a day they always warn us, but to be fair it's rare that it happens Story Development 5/5 It's a little slow since the focus of the novel is more on the comedy but it's enjoyable nonetheless Character Design 5/5 (Can I place a 6/5 here?) The best part of the story in my opinion, all characters feel alive and the protagonist is one of my favorites and I love her personality World Background 5/5 the mix of Naruto and Xianxia is quite interesting and I want to see more of it

DaoistFsp3bF
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Miako_Lyn
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11/10 would come back and read it all over again. -11/10 would drop the novel. 10/10 would type the whole story in my notes so I can treasure it forever with the others I typed dilligently with a hint of ignoring my laziness. 10/10 would ask the author for permission to type this in my notes. 101/10 would put some random scale of something to surpass the 140 characters. 10/10 would sing a random song with no apparent reason.

Xana_Shadow
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The story in itself is great but halfway through (like, chapter 120 or 130) the author completely changes the way he's writing and seems to have completely changed their direction of where the story is headed. I do recommend this story, but I personally am gonna stop reading because of personal preference. I was already skeptical because of some unnecessary changes to the Canon (and some ridiculous aspects about the MC), but the sudden shift is what made me stop. Great story and thank the author for writing it, it's just not for me.

marianela_arebalo_7450
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author hopefully change the pairing (since would be for nothing to save her and end with Naruto in the end, everyone thought that it would end with the protagonist, because if in the end you make it end with Naruto, the whole drama is silly, you'd better have it left as the canon where they meet and would have continued with the story, you blew a good potential). - Surely the majority is bothered by the result of the pairing, everyone expected a development, but you leave us with this chapter. - I hope you cheer up and edit it and make naruto mate with another girl (people want the development of hinata's romance with the protagonist, if not, it won't do for you to save her).

SugarGodno1
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The whole plot, it doesn’t make any sense . Why would minato put kyubii in his daughter when he saw what child birth can do to his jinchuriki wife. So when his daughter will give birth the kyubii will break free. Minato is too smart to do that. I dont think this whole story makes sense . Plus lot of au and forced stuff . It has a harem which usually ruins any good story .

alex_Valhalla
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after reading "in naruto reborn with three talent" makes this novel boring.........................................................................................................................

Darklord02
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Randomguy010
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Shouldn't this be in the female lead section. reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

reinkernation
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I really like the development of Yuna and the butterfly-effect with the second reincarnator. It is incredibly funny to see the chaos the different characters create (some without even trying).

bold_lion_6739
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