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LazyDragonDaoist
LazyDragonDaoistLv133yr
2021-08-24 14:26

Right so far I love to story, however the Goddess/Patron interjecting and basically making him a...sigh I don't like this world but a "beta" mc and all this slapstick comedy, it just needs to be turned down or find a way to make the CP(Clone Patron) become an automated drone or status page type deal. because while the CP does give him information...I don't know it just feels off for me and if it keeps going on like this for the whole story...then ill have to drop the book. Nothing too you, the story isn't bad per se but its not to my tastes, so take anything I say will a pinch of salt and do what you think is best for you.

Beyond Earth:The horizon

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4.0
126 Chs

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abrwastaken
abrwastakenLv1

Feels a bit generic, but sufficiently different from other novels. Im eager to see where the autor will take this, the nexus idea is very interesting. Just work on your writing skills a bit, and this story willl become a great one...

3yr

Skorzeur
SkorzeurLv3

It is an awesome story. The protagonist is smart, strong but not overpowered. His primary source of power till now is Technologie; Mechas, Futuristic Guns. So be ware if you don't like that stuff but also who knows maybe it will change in the future.

3yr
RainySand
RainySandLv4

5 star comments selling false hope. My motivation wasn't enough to carry me through so I dropped it getting close to the end of infinite stratos arc. And that is what I will review. Author if you gonna put a tag down please stick to it and don't bait anyone. A chapter named the world only god knows is very misleading and putting your character into infinite stratos instead of another mecha based franchise is questionable. The action and adventure aspect was quite lacking. Really hard to tell who's speaking unless you focus. Long walls of dialogue that leads nowhere. Personally I hardly cared about other characters. MC's personality never draws you in. Does the same boring stuff once reincarnated. The goddess, she's a back seat driver absolutely annoying. The author is kind of planning along and adjusting to the comments made.Good thing.Though there will be changes so keep that in mind. The writing is pretty decent than most other novels here. I gave extra points for the authors dedication. welp I'm out

3yr
joaoq
joaoqLv1

Liked it really amazing on my point of view, cant wait for the next chapter man congrats, the history is really cool and the characters too

3yr
DJDAN
DJDANLv3

It's a pretty decent read, defenitely suggest giving it a go. It starts off in Infinite Stratos. Writing quality is decent. I got lucky and decided to pick it up because I was bored.

3yr
lucas_bittencourt
lucas_bittencourtLv1

I'm really enjoying the narrative created by the author. I loved the nexus idea.I hope the story keeps advancing with new characters to improve the plot!

3yr
Kwetzal_Lag
Kwetzal_LagLv5

I'll read this at aome point... maybe after I've caught up with the new Azimuth chaps

1yr
Lavendor
LavendorLv3

Hi, just here to fill in the 10th review :). From the synopsis I'll definitely give it a try. ......................................................

3yr
Xouldrion
XouldrionLv3

Welp this story is quite good compared to most famous fan fics where MCs just think with their... Though it has it's downsides, sometimes the dialogue gets a bit confusing at least from my standpoint and my brain just skips it all together. Overall it's quite good

3yr
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