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theevilfishyLv103yr
2021-10-05 00:48

between chapters 1-100 is the best section of the story between 101-200 is sort of okay but the system almost doesn't exist(not exactly the strongest system) between 201-300 the MC makes decisions that make reading further impossible. At least for me, and it really let me take a step back and analyze details I had been ignoring. Which really killed everything that was interesting about this story all at once.

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