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sari_saarinen
sari_saarinenLv33yr
2021-03-31 08:33

asking if its harem and will he get devil fruit and if gets which prefered and does he go around playing hero or is he luffys underling i need info so i dont waste time not prefered

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Paradox_
Paradox_Author

Harem - 1 main lover but later on a few more may join, MAX 3 Fruit - He will get a main fruit, it will arrive in chap. 5 Timeline - He is born in 1470 which is 52 years before Luffy Allegiance - He will join a crew temporarily before going solo, more will be revealed about it soon

sari_saarinen
sari_saarinenLv3

yesss im going to start reading it now xd

Paradox_:Harem - 1 main lover but later on a few more may join, MAX 3 Fruit - He will get a main fruit, it will arrive in chap. 5 Timeline - He is born in 1470 which is 52 years before Luffy Allegiance - He will join a crew temporarily before going solo, more will be revealed about it soon
Ryofu
RyofuLv11

"He is born in 1470 which is 52 years before Luffy", So there will be no romance with the women from the original work then? Or are you going to give the Mc a way to go to the canon? (pseudo immortality or an ability to go to the future?) What I understand right now is that, except the older people of the series, there will only be OC?

Paradox_:Harem - 1 main lover but later on a few more may join, MAX 3 Fruit - He will get a main fruit, it will arrive in chap. 5 Timeline - He is born in 1470 which is 52 years before Luffy Allegiance - He will join a crew temporarily before going solo, more will be revealed about it soon
The_Berserker
The_BerserkerLv5

why the heck the mc will go to the future or gain immoratality ? just because he is 52 years before canon ? lol

Ryofu:"He is born in 1470 which is 52 years before Luffy", So there will be no romance with the women from the original work then? Or are you going to give the Mc a way to go to the canon? (pseudo immortality or an ability to go to the future?) What I understand right now is that, except the older people of the series, there will only be OC?
Ryofu
RyofuLv11

Because, when I ream a Fanfic, I want to see how the MC influence the original world, how they interact with the character from the original story and how the MC change their "fate". With the "52 years in the past" we know the MC will not meet most of the original character or will be too old to truly interact with them. So the only way I though about the MC interacting with them are the two option I said before. That's why I'm asking, to know if the fanfic will interest me or not, that's all.

The_Berserker:why the heck the mc will go to the future or gain immoratality ? just because he is 52 years before canon ? lol
The_Berserker
The_BerserkerLv5

me to loke mc when he met OG characters BUT is garp, roger , sengoku, whitebeard , rock, kaido , big mam , in the past not og characters ? and more important 52 years in the past he already younger than all of them by 20 years XD he is by age of akainu and kizarou and aokiji and Dragon that good time better that Brat age of teenager like luffy 17 years old, you want mc to be 15 years old defeating old monsters like kaido or garp ??

Ryofu:Because, when I ream a Fanfic, I want to see how the MC influence the original world, how they interact with the character from the original story and how the MC change their "fate". With the "52 years in the past" we know the MC will not meet most of the original character or will be too old to truly interact with them. So the only way I though about the MC interacting with them are the two option I said before. That's why I'm asking, to know if the fanfic will interest me or not, that's all.
Ryofu
RyofuLv11

Never said the MC should be 15 years old... All the name you said doesn't interest me except whitebeard, the other I never was interested in them xD. But even so, if he create a crew, how many of them will be within it? None... which will result in all the crew being OC that I will not be able to care about... If he doesn't create a crew and go solo? it will be interesting for some time but will go downward extremely fast because you'll have low interaction or development. I say it once more, this is MY point of view, some will like it if the story doesn't have the OG character and only focus on OC, but not me.

The_Berserker:me to loke mc when he met OG characters BUT is garp, roger , sengoku, whitebeard , rock, kaido , big mam , in the past not og characters ? and more important 52 years in the past he already younger than all of them by 20 years XD he is by age of akainu and kizarou and aokiji and Dragon that good time better that Brat age of teenager like luffy 17 years old, you want mc to be 15 years old defeating old monsters like kaido or garp ??
Deeq8
Deeq8Lv4

Please change your mind noharem please

Paradox_:Harem - 1 main lover but later on a few more may join, MAX 3 Fruit - He will get a main fruit, it will arrive in chap. 5 Timeline - He is born in 1470 which is 52 years before Luffy Allegiance - He will join a crew temporarily before going solo, more will be revealed about it soon
Deeq8
Deeq8Lv4

Chill mf I’m just stating my opinion bitchass mf

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Hizashi_sensei
Hizashi_senseiLv10

Yeah, I would also like no harem.

Deeq8:Please change your mind noharem please
BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

Is Boa part of the harem or the main lover? I need to know. I dislike reading One Piece fanfics without knowing. Since Boa Hancock is the only reason I pay attention to One Piece lol.

Paradox_:Harem - 1 main lover but later on a few more may join, MAX 3 Fruit - He will get a main fruit, it will arrive in chap. 5 Timeline - He is born in 1470 which is 52 years before Luffy Allegiance - He will join a crew temporarily before going solo, more will be revealed about it soon
Starvation
StarvationLv10

She hasn't appeared so far.

BreezyNovels:Is Boa part of the harem or the main lover? I need to know. I dislike reading One Piece fanfics without knowing. Since Boa Hancock is the only reason I pay attention to One Piece lol.
Great_Young_Master
Great_Young_MasterLv4

Lol, this fanfic is really good. Even if your only reason to read OP fanfics is because of her at least try to read this fanfic. Definitely recommend it.

BreezyNovels:Is Boa part of the harem or the main lover? I need to know. I dislike reading One Piece fanfics without knowing. Since Boa Hancock is the only reason I pay attention to One Piece lol.
Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6

Honestly the Max of 3 is a real downer. Mostly because One Piece has tons of nice females so its hard to pick just 3. I guess you make it easier since the MC is so early in the timeline that some of the fan favorites like Hancock, Robin, Vivi, Nami, now Yamato lol, and many others arent even born so they arent even in the running. However that leaves older females of which there truly arent many. Which means we have to settle for OCs, which are hard to get attached to and envision unlike actual canon female characters. Honestly i was hoping for at least 5 i know kind of a lot. I have no excuse, im a defenerate. However this has really taken the wind out of my sails. See what i did there? I can only hope that the 3 that you pick are actually worth while.

Paradox_:Harem - 1 main lover but later on a few more may join, MAX 3 Fruit - He will get a main fruit, it will arrive in chap. 5 Timeline - He is born in 1470 which is 52 years before Luffy Allegiance - He will join a crew temporarily before going solo, more will be revealed about it soon
Nachoss
NachossLv4

Can you recommend some ff with Hancock?

BreezyNovels:Is Boa part of the harem or the main lover? I need to know. I dislike reading One Piece fanfics without knowing. Since Boa Hancock is the only reason I pay attention to One Piece lol.
BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

I wish I could friend. But I have not read One Piece fanfics since I made that comment. Been focusing on other fictional worlds. You can give God of Soul System a try, though its not fully on Webnovel. And Boa is rarely seen even though she is the sole romantic interest.

Nachoss:Can you recommend some ff with Hancock?
Nachoss
NachossLv4

Already read that one and it was good. Thanks anyway.

BreezyNovels:I wish I could friend. But I have not read One Piece fanfics since I made that comment. Been focusing on other fictional worlds. You can give God of Soul System a try, though its not fully on Webnovel. And Boa is rarely seen even though she is the sole romantic interest.
kana_noshihara
kana_noshiharaLv1

only 3? well you should add more

Paradox_:Harem - 1 main lover but later on a few more may join, MAX 3 Fruit - He will get a main fruit, it will arrive in chap. 5 Timeline - He is born in 1470 which is 52 years before Luffy Allegiance - He will join a crew temporarily before going solo, more will be revealed about it soon
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

well i agree with you , because i want to see the original story change and see the characters like the original , that's why i like ff , i always hate ff that mc came before protagonist era , at least 5-10 years before canon , also really hate waifu world others mixed with the original world , like for example dxd many waifu but calling waifu destiny , are they stupid or brain deficient haha.

Ryofu:Never said the MC should be 15 years old... All the name you said doesn't interest me except whitebeard, the other I never was interested in them xD. But even so, if he create a crew, how many of them will be within it? None... which will result in all the crew being OC that I will not be able to care about... If he doesn't create a crew and go solo? it will be interesting for some time but will go downward extremely fast because you'll have low interaction or development. I say it once more, this is MY point of view, some will like it if the story doesn't have the OG character and only focus on OC, but not me.
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

Ew 3 is not a harem , it is just polygamy , also toki and oc meh they are not worth it.

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