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Harvez
HarvezLv13yr
2021-07-23 20:12

The best fan fiction on van peace that I have read in my life. I won't say anything about grammar, since I read with the help of a translator, which makes it almost impossible to notice mistakes, but the writing style is very pleasant to the eye. The character of the characters is very natural and there is no feeling that the author has changed them for the sake of his plot. The very infusion of MC into the plot also feels natural, which is very good. The beginning may seem cringe, as well as the actions of the main character in the first chapters may cause some to discard this fan fiction, but then the author has greatly improved. The battle scenes are written beautifully, the improvement of the main character's strength is consistent and fast, but it does not go beyond the OP. Romance also pleases, although the author constantly writes that such scenes are not given to him, for me they look very nice.

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ARandomOtaku_
ARandomOtaku_Lv14

What is this translator that u use

Harvez
HarvezLv1

I live in Russia, and we have a domestic company Yandex, one of the developments of which is Yandex translator, which was specially created for translating from Russian to English and vice versa, which is why it makes it as pleasant as possible for machine translation.

ARandomOtaku_:What is this translator that u use
DaoistOuVZ63
DaoistOuVZ63Lv1

Брат из Рашки, салам

Harvez:I live in Russia, and we have a domestic company Yandex, one of the developments of which is Yandex translator, which was specially created for translating from Russian to English and vice versa, which is why it makes it as pleasant as possible for machine translation.
Harvez
HarvezLv1

Здравствуй.

DaoistOuVZ63:Брат из Рашки, салам
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Globy_Globy
Globy_GlobyLv1

Я не один такой умный. На рулейте главы платные, а тут можно спокойно читать. Перевод вроде не плохой.

Harvez:Здравствуй.
Nemark
NemarkLv4

Вот бы и в приложении Webnovel был такой же хороший перевод

Globy_Globy:Я не один такой умный. На рулейте главы платные, а тут можно спокойно читать. Перевод вроде не плохой.
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