BreezyNovels

Brother. Its on the fanon wiki, for roleplayers and fanfiction. Its not canon to any official Star Wars universe.

With all due respect. All this glazing right off the bat feels like a far step back from your usual level of storytelling.

This story seems rushed, and some poor narrative decisions have been made. I have not heard a real goal so far, even if it's early chapters, besides just living. That does not sound fun personally to read, even if it's in line with the character's personality. Not to mention the character sheet chapter is a mess x.x I hope it gets better since I like the overarching premise. Plus, your writing is not even close to the worst.

I don't even know if it was ever canon or not. Star Wars is a mess right now. It honestly might be fanon and I was out here spreading misinformation x.x

Buddy, there are only a few types of government. Weak and Ineffectual, Strong and Tyrannical, Weak and Tyrannical. There are a few more, but most governments are not actually for the people; they just have to appear as if they are for the people. Really, society has not changed all that much from Kings and Nobles. They just have different names now. Like Presidents and CEO's. Presidents and Kings need CEO and Nobility support. Or Presidents and Kings need to have a hold of the military.

You're very confrontational, lmao. I am pretty sure he said that, as increasing suspicion that this is translated. Because saying you feel like you could punch a bull to death is a common Chinese trope saying.

I like the idea except for the system elements. Maybe more organic, like gaining abilities from drinking blood? But only ones compatible with vampires, so there is no ability bloat. Because Dracula from Castlevania is already OP af. Then just make him a Planeswalker so he can travel the multiverse. Learning how to control the ability. Plus, maybe some Kingdom Building by giving him Dracula's natural inclinations? I also love going to less-used fandoms and them having to deal with an out-of-context problem like Dracula.

Honestly, you are horribly wrong. Its explicity stated that its 7 Kingdoms ruled by 1. The North is massive. Northerners hate Southerners and view them as prudes and disdain their traditions. Southerners view Northerners as Barbarians, so they never go North. The North follows the Old Gods. The only Church of The Seven in the North is a tiny one Ned allowed Catelyn to have built. The only one in thousands of years. Northerners love their Bastards and some of their greatest heroes are Bastards.

Change the Synopsis to remove where it says no Harem and add a Harem tag?

Any romance? Not with any students in Hogwarts. I mean, just in general.