My honest review (still biased). Naturally, with respect to fanfictions, I'd round it to 4/5. It is a different timeline than most One Piece fanfics with a more driven MC, lest he is swept away by the turbulent seas. The recently posted chapters are a rewrite, thus ANY review before this one is outdated and inaccurate. I suggest reading the first arc, chapters 1-11, to get a taste of the story and whether it is for you. Check out the Disclaimers chapter for more information. Thanks for stopping by.

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The best fan fiction on van peace that I have read in my life. I won't say anything about grammar, since I read with the help of a translator, which makes it almost impossible to notice mistakes, but the writing style is very pleasant to the eye. The character of the characters is very natural and there is no feeling that the author has changed them for the sake of his plot. The very infusion of MC into the plot also feels natural, which is very good. The beginning may seem cringe, as well as the actions of the main character in the first chapters may cause some to discard this fan fiction, but then the author has greatly improved. The battle scenes are written beautifully, the improvement of the main character's strength is consistent and fast, but it does not go beyond the OP. Romance also pleases, although the author constantly writes that such scenes are not given to him, for me they look very nice.

A really good start for a fanfic. Nice devil fruit. Good Talent. I hope the System wont dictate his life, because the strength of the people in One Piece fluctuate very much. And I hope his cheats wont become too rediculous. I like the curse release and a bloodline. I hope he works hard for his power.

An utterly unnecessary rewrite. The author took a one year hiatus in order to organize everything and rewrite. The previous one was already pretty good, the author could've just gradually improved their writing and the quality of the story by releasing chapters regularly. However, they said they wanted some time to rewrite everything because they wanted the whole book to be consistent in its quality. The result? This ridiculous... thing? Honestly, I'm incredibly disappointed since this was one of my favorite fanfics and the previous one certainly managed to tug at my emotional strings, but this one isn't doing it at all. The incorrect use of adjectives and certain verbs isn't helping with the immersion, the characters that were properly fleshed out in the previous writing weren't even fleshed out properly (e.g. Whitebeard vs Borealis), the world-building is worse compared to the previous one, and the story development and pacing is all over the place, it feels like you don't know what they'll do next (not in a good way) and since everthing just happens all of a sudden without a proper build up or suspense, the story ends up feeling lackluster compared to the previous one, a shadow of its former self. To conclude, this is a rewrite that turned out for the worse. WAY WORSE. If you expect this'll be as good as the previous one, just read something else and save your time.

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i am tired reading cliche of mc parents died, i thought this story will be different since author said that he hated weak mc parents but it seems it's my misunderstanding what the author mean.

asking if its harem and will he get devil fruit and if gets which prefered and does he go around playing hero or is he luffys underling i need info so i dont waste time not prefered