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Blackwater
BlackwaterLv124yr
2021-03-08 06:48

I find the story pretty boring, mostly because of the way the MC interacts with the world, all is unnecessary dramatic and complicated. It's not a bad Fanfic but in the later ch. it suffers like so many chinese ff from a over complicated story that makes little sense

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Space_Fox
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I don't really see how it becomes complicated or degrade later in the chapters at all

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Ked18
Ked18Lv5

Just to be clear, I am rating the origin book and not this translation (though the translation is good, it's just too slow for me). Now, I am already about 1000 chapter in this book and it doesn't disappoint. Pros: -Not likely a harem (with what is shown, the girls will just at most be 2) -No *** scenes, just pure power building and behind the scene actions. -No gaping plothole -The characters fully encapsulate their canon selves. -Does not stick to the canon but the flow of events are very reasonable, with only some being forced. -MC is OP but not infallible. He also makes mistakes from time to time -Everyone's reaction is funny -And finally, the most notable reason why I continue reading this and anticipate for more and is in fact the main selling point of the story: Everyone's reaction when the real identity of the mc is revealed. The authors way of hiding the mc's identity is very ingenious. And how everyone tries tries but fails to see Mt. Tai in front of them is very funny. -Author also gives a very reasonable explanation why MC needs to hide his identity so he does it not just for coolness or something. Cons: -Most likely not a harem -MC's relationship with his fiancee is not fully explored. The fiancee is also treated just slightly better than background characters. In short, the romance aspect of this story is really lacking. -The experiments, although most are logical, but those with less than 1% probability or even deemed impossible can still succeed. -because some people might hate it, mc has an enemy that has power greater than him but is afraid of mc due to his bullshitting skils -MC has a limit on the growth of his tenseigan without first enacting his experiment that even until now is almost just about to complete

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