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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv104yr
2020-12-14 03:46

He has trash talent, beta mc, caged seal so aka he is a slave, has been in the world for over 10 years but he is weak and just flat out pathetic

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sai_potluri
sai_potluriLv1

Hbu read it again huh It changes and it becomes much better.

F_E_X_A
F_E_X_ALv11

I'm willing to bet this guy is a minor...

Mao_Sama_3820
Mao_Sama_3820Lv3

imagine reading 1st chapter and commenting

Zhove
ZhoveLv12

I can say the same for you uwu

Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

Ever heard of character development? Just because this is a fan fic doesnt mean the MC is OP from the start. If you want that go read one of those harem face slapping novels

Supreme_Leader
Supreme_LeaderLv12

SAGELYGUYVAY
SAGELYGUYVAYLv3

500 hundred chapters in still not a god

sai_potluri:Hbu read it again huh It changes and it becomes much better.
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Dragon912
Dragon912Lv3

U think in 500 chaps this dude is supposed to go from zero to kaguya level without a system. 🤨

SAGELYGUYVAY:500 hundred chapters in still not a god
poob_tuag
poob_tuagLv14

idk about you, but if I see a review with "Beta mc" than it already becomes invalid in my eyes

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Ked18
Ked18Lv5

Just to be clear, I am rating the origin book and not this translation (though the translation is good, it's just too slow for me). Now, I am already about 1000 chapter in this book and it doesn't disappoint. Pros: -Not likely a harem (with what is shown, the girls will just at most be 2) -No *** scenes, just pure power building and behind the scene actions. -No gaping plothole -The characters fully encapsulate their canon selves. -Does not stick to the canon but the flow of events are very reasonable, with only some being forced. -MC is OP but not infallible. He also makes mistakes from time to time -Everyone's reaction is funny -And finally, the most notable reason why I continue reading this and anticipate for more and is in fact the main selling point of the story: Everyone's reaction when the real identity of the mc is revealed. The authors way of hiding the mc's identity is very ingenious. And how everyone tries tries but fails to see Mt. Tai in front of them is very funny. -Author also gives a very reasonable explanation why MC needs to hide his identity so he does it not just for coolness or something. Cons: -Most likely not a harem -MC's relationship with his fiancee is not fully explored. The fiancee is also treated just slightly better than background characters. In short, the romance aspect of this story is really lacking. -The experiments, although most are logical, but those with less than 1% probability or even deemed impossible can still succeed. -because some people might hate it, mc has an enemy that has power greater than him but is afraid of mc due to his bullshitting skils -MC has a limit on the growth of his tenseigan without first enacting his experiment that even until now is almost just about to complete

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