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Ked18
Ked18Lv54yr
2021-01-06 03:06

Just to be clear, I am rating the origin book and not this translation (though the translation is good, it's just too slow for me). Now, I am already about 1000 chapter in this book and it doesn't disappoint. Pros: -Not likely a harem (with what is shown, the girls will just at most be 2) -No *** scenes, just pure power building and behind the scene actions. -No gaping plothole -The characters fully encapsulate their canon selves. -Does not stick to the canon but the flow of events are very reasonable, with only some being forced. -MC is OP but not infallible. He also makes mistakes from time to time -Everyone's reaction is funny -And finally, the most notable reason why I continue reading this and anticipate for more and is in fact the main selling point of the story: Everyone's reaction when the real identity of the mc is revealed. The authors way of hiding the mc's identity is very ingenious. And how everyone tries tries but fails to see Mt. Tai in front of them is very funny. -Author also gives a very reasonable explanation why MC needs to hide his identity so he does it not just for coolness or something. Cons: -Most likely not a harem -MC's relationship with his fiancee is not fully explored. The fiancee is also treated just slightly better than background characters. In short, the romance aspect of this story is really lacking. -The experiments, although most are logical, but those with less than 1% probability or even deemed impossible can still succeed. -because some people might hate it, mc has an enemy that has power greater than him but is afraid of mc due to his bullshitting skils -MC has a limit on the growth of his tenseigan without first enacting his experiment that even until now is almost just about to complete

Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan

Alex_Clive
4.5
904 Chs

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Alex_Clive
Alex_CliveAuthor

In fact, it's not a harem, not even until the end... there's just one girl and that same one is the only one to marry him.

4yr
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Ked18
Ked18Lv5

So sad...Welp, atleast there's some love interest. This book is not really suited to have romance anyway, so him having someone to be by his side is more than enough.

Alex_Clive:In fact, it's not a harem, not even until the end... there's just one girl and that same one is the only one to marry him.
4yr
3
Lord_Rimuru
Lord_RimuruLv4

I love how you added the "most likely not a harem" to both the pro and con list lmao

4yr
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Sometimes I just wonder about the people on this platform. People are actually giving this amazing novel and low rating for just not being OP at the start? It’s pure stupidity , utter and pure stupidity. If you wanna break for all the normal garbage fanfiction’s that you read on this platform this is the one to read. It has a refreshing start and solid premise. Compared to a holy joker fic, this is so much better. Ignore the bad reviews, most of them are just butthurt that he wasn’t throwing planets around as a baby. I swear people on Webnovel sometimes lack brain cells

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amaturewriter
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Its a chinese novel but its translated really well. and its interesting concept to. title pretty much tells it all. MC during minatos era and student of a sannin. No love interests so far [ 9 chps ]. no cringe, too unrealistic or even any retarded moments so far. plus MC seems to be a planner, plus his power OP [ potential to be OP ]. no system also. yay only downside is MC weak. not a weak bitch lvl but considering what he has and what he is and who he is [ an SI from our world ], he should at the very least have been jonin or something then with the magic eye, higher cause it does give a boost. thought MC is neutered for story purposes I guess. too OP and no story. still him being so weak is retarded. [ by weak I mean his overall power, not including cunningness, intelligence, etc ]

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the beginning is different from other works of naruto fanfic, which is really good, now just hope that the MC doesn't become any psychopath without feelings because this is very repetitive, he has the ambition to be kage something rare in fanfic since other protagonists have no ambitions, teisengan is good but I hope he doesn’t go around wanting to get hashirama cells since this is ridiculous

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I haven't read the story yet but it's probably this novel https://***.mtlnovel.com/reincarnation-in-naruto-world/ there is 1460 chapter in mtl and its really easy to understand and I really don't understand people like you... if you can't copy the link here write this in search bar Reincarnation in Naruto World (Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan)

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Infamous_Fitz
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The mc is to weak to be a hyuga and a chunnin but he is even weaker than the average chunnin even with the tenseigan the mc is like a super weak version of orochimaru he only know to jutsu people taught him

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Jasmine_OrenoLv3

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