Blackwater

the story starts pretty good, but it goes downhill fast, the characters are not well developed even after many chapters, the system and the idea behind it dont fit the story or the powerless that well. and after the first 30 or so chapters the rest feels like 50% filler and drawn out plot. overall it had good potential but fell very short

overall I give the story a solid 4 of 5. The main point reduction comes from the sometimes a bit inconsistent writing, the pov changes and some of the story choices that feel a bit forced in my opinion. For the most part the story goes pretty deep into some snippets of the lore for a fanfiction and the overall pace feels good. I personally am not a big fan of frequent pov changes, interludes so the writing style didn't match my likes but the story is still ok.

plot twist: she isn't deaf and now is wondering why the boy is throwing gang signs at her

For those wondering about saltwater, the one mentioned here is water mixed with a small bit of salt and normally also sugar, creating a very basic and simple energy/ electrolyte drink.

it's teen spirit, it smells like teen spirit

it's starts pretty good overall the first few chapters are pretty upbeat, and the development is nicely paced and gives time for the characters to develop a bit. Sadly, after the time skip, it goes just downhill. The character changes from a calm and collected character to a cold shifty one. It kinda takes all the fun out of the story and doesn't make much sense to me as even the plot gets darker with little to no world building in that direction. The story overall is not bad, but I didn't enjoy it in the later half.

I don't know, truthfully Sansa is basirhe Ginny Weasly of GOT in the worst way. Fingerling for her Hero, delusional until you break her out of it and more Tully than Stark. There are better options

that's not stealing, that is Looting, and if you beat a trashmob, it's only polite to also loot them

hmm, if it's like that, wouldn't there be some people running around with a Divine Grade plug up the Bumm ? You know for that sweet internal and external power absorption

it's OK, I guess. The DxD arc while pretty rushed was fine overall, the story kinda lost me somewhere in the middle of the Tensura Arc, I just didn't enjoy how the world building was handled, the Dimensions mumbo jumbo, and the Time spans that were used. At some point, there was less fun stuff for me and more meh plot points on a list with more Higher Dimensions Bs mixed into it. That doesn't mean it was bad or anything, but I personally enjoyed it far less.