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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_GgazeliLv104yr
2020-11-25 14:37

the beginning is different from other works of naruto fanfic, which is really good, now just hope that the MC doesn't become any psychopath without feelings because this is very repetitive, he has the ambition to be kage something rare in fanfic since other protagonists have no ambitions, teisengan is good but I hope he doesn’t go around wanting to get hashirama cells since this is ridiculous

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AuthorJinn
AuthorJinnLv2

Exactly, Every fanfic mc always go hunting for some hashirama cells 😂

TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv14

Hashirama Cells equal a good Healing factor🤷🏽‍♂️

AuthorJinn:Exactly, Every fanfic mc always go hunting for some hashirama cells 😂
DragonGodAsurA
DragonGodAsurALv4

I actually have seen many novels where the mc wasn't heroic and had some kind I'm a hero who goes out of his way to save everyone

Zezeleas
ZezeleasLv2

Have you ever heard of Yami? naruto way to immortality by holy joker?

DragonGodAsurA:I actually have seen many novels where the mc wasn't heroic and had some kind I'm a hero who goes out of his way to save everyone
Quandalesnuts
QuandalesnutsLv4

what annoys me is in most fanfictions they just become god and travel to different worlds

Anjishnu_Nandi
Anjishnu_NandiLv4

Yes Yami the boss. The guy who f*cked up the entire timeline and used it to his advantage to become GOD

Zezeleas:Have you ever heard of Yami? naruto way to immortality by holy joker?
214dnde
214dndeLv4

I just dont want him to be another naruto and sasuke simp

Zeenp
ZeenpLv1

where do I see this?

Zezeleas:Have you ever heard of Yami? naruto way to immortality by holy joker?
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Gold_6707
Gold_6707Lv4

He isn't, but he does prioritise them over most others, mainly so there isn't a chance that Hagoromo gets pissed at him.

214dnde:I just dont want him to be another naruto and sasuke simp
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Ked18
Ked18Lv5

Just to be clear, I am rating the origin book and not this translation (though the translation is good, it's just too slow for me). Now, I am already about 1000 chapter in this book and it doesn't disappoint. Pros: -Not likely a harem (with what is shown, the girls will just at most be 2) -No *** scenes, just pure power building and behind the scene actions. -No gaping plothole -The characters fully encapsulate their canon selves. -Does not stick to the canon but the flow of events are very reasonable, with only some being forced. -MC is OP but not infallible. He also makes mistakes from time to time -Everyone's reaction is funny -And finally, the most notable reason why I continue reading this and anticipate for more and is in fact the main selling point of the story: Everyone's reaction when the real identity of the mc is revealed. The authors way of hiding the mc's identity is very ingenious. And how everyone tries tries but fails to see Mt. Tai in front of them is very funny. -Author also gives a very reasonable explanation why MC needs to hide his identity so he does it not just for coolness or something. Cons: -Most likely not a harem -MC's relationship with his fiancee is not fully explored. The fiancee is also treated just slightly better than background characters. In short, the romance aspect of this story is really lacking. -The experiments, although most are logical, but those with less than 1% probability or even deemed impossible can still succeed. -because some people might hate it, mc has an enemy that has power greater than him but is afraid of mc due to his bullshitting skils -MC has a limit on the growth of his tenseigan without first enacting his experiment that even until now is almost just about to complete

Boris147
Boris147Lv10
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