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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv44yr
2020-11-18 13:54

Its a chinese novel but its translated really well. and its interesting concept to. title pretty much tells it all. MC during minatos era and student of a sannin. No love interests so far [ 9 chps ]. no cringe, too unrealistic or even any retarded moments so far. plus MC seems to be a planner, plus his power OP [ potential to be OP ]. no system also. yay only downside is MC weak. not a weak bitch lvl but considering what he has and what he is and who he is [ an SI from our world ], he should at the very least have been jonin or something then with the magic eye, higher cause it does give a boost. thought MC is neutered for story purposes I guess. too OP and no story. still him being so weak is retarded. [ by weak I mean his overall power, not including cunningness, intelligence, etc ]

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Edgelord666
Edgelord666Lv5

i have read the mtl version man and i was not impressed story looked far too forced after some.40 chapters

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

what happens? is it the relationships? or the reasons that make MC stay in konoha or why he doesnt become OP despite all his hax? [ cause the what happens usually in mtl ff]..or is it something else?

Edgelord666:i have read the mtl version man and i was not impressed story looked far too forced after some.40 chapters
Edgelord666
Edgelord666Lv5

2nd reason whenever he get's a powerup something comes up. he has a army of mangekyu clones and still... he has a lot of power and next second he is nerfed. he didn't do anything about his seal. he doesn't leave konaha and he barely survive orchimaru etc.

amaturewriter:what happens? is it the relationships? or the reasons that make MC stay in konoha or why he doesnt become OP despite all his hax? [ cause the what happens usually in mtl ff]..or is it something else?
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

that is stupid. thx for heads up

Edgelord666:2nd reason whenever he get's a powerup something comes up. he has a army of mangekyu clones and still... he has a lot of power and next second he is nerfed. he didn't do anything about his seal. he doesn't leave konaha and he barely survive orchimaru etc.
PassionTaoist
PassionTaoistLv4

Chinese fanfictions are stupid I hate em. I regret reading their mtl.

amaturewriter:that is stupid. thx for heads up
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

I swear...like they entertaining no doubt but the writers fk up cannon so much and still allow it to happen. the fk? like the marine story with garps nephew. MC killed doffy, bigmom, crocodile, and yet cannon still happened. the hell? retarded

PassionTaoist:Chinese fanfictions are stupid I hate em. I regret reading their mtl.
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PassionTaoist
PassionTaoistLv4

I agree the beggining is so fun. But if you read the 500-1000chapters Chinese fanfictions the plot twist IS SO FUCKING ANNOYING AND ENRAGING. ****! I wasted my time and brain cells reading mtl.

amaturewriter:I swear...like they entertaining no doubt but the writers fk up cannon so much and still allow it to happen. the fk? like the marine story with garps nephew. MC killed doffy, bigmom, crocodile, and yet cannon still happened. the hell? retarded
hung_up_my_coat
hung_up_my_coatLv3

he doesnt have an army of mangekyo clones ... he has one or maybe two at most?

Edgelord666:2nd reason whenever he get's a powerup something comes up. he has a army of mangekyu clones and still... he has a lot of power and next second he is nerfed. he didn't do anything about his seal. he doesn't leave konaha and he barely survive orchimaru etc.
Fweeee_eeee
Fweeee_eeeeLv10

I HATE MTL!!! I mean Chinese novels are like a diamond at the core but their writing style and totally identical portrayl of their characters and of course the cliché forced and pathetic romance is like selling a diamond after covering it in a million layers mud.😤😤

YameteAuthorSan
YameteAuthorSanLv5

Thanks for the review man i nearly wasted my time there

Shadowwolf123987
Shadowwolf123987Lv3

oh hi fancy seeing you here. I like your magneto novel

Edgelord666:2nd reason whenever he get's a powerup something comes up. he has a army of mangekyu clones and still... he has a lot of power and next second he is nerfed. he didn't do anything about his seal. he doesn't leave konaha and he barely survive orchimaru etc.
Edgelord666
Edgelord666Lv5

thanks

Shadowwolf123987:oh hi fancy seeing you here. I like your magneto novel
_MCkekskuchen_
_MCkekskuchen_Lv5

Could you please tell me what mtl is? I have no fuc*ing idea

Fweeee_eeee:I HATE MTL!!! I mean Chinese novels are like a diamond at the core but their writing style and totally identical portrayl of their characters and of course the cliché forced and pathetic romance is like selling a diamond after covering it in a million layers mud.😤😤
TDI
TDILv10

Most likely machine translation but could be wrong

_MCkekskuchen_:Could you please tell me what mtl is? I have no fuc*ing idea
Kailour
KailourLv6

machine translation. Kinda like if you were to put an entire chapter through google translate, yet slightly more readable. If you can stand the Engrish some of them are fine, but every once in a while you'll find one that has such god awful grammar you get a headache just from reading it.

_MCkekskuchen_:Could you please tell me what mtl is? I have no fuc*ing idea
_MCkekskuchen_
_MCkekskuchen_Lv5

Ok thanks

Kailour:machine translation. Kinda like if you were to put an entire chapter through google translate, yet slightly more readable. If you can stand the Engrish some of them are fine, but every once in a while you'll find one that has such god awful grammar you get a headache just from reading it.
Braian_Rodriguez
Braian_RodriguezLv1

Fui el único que se dio cuenta que yui sería mucho mejor uchiha que hyuga, esa frase, "el me importa más que el mundo mismo" solo esa frase me dice que si ella hubiese tenido sharingan se hubiese petado más que madara, y seria la protagonista rota en lugar del protagonista actual.

CyberElf_Evandle
CyberElf_EvandleLv3

I've read this fanfic through the end on mtl and its pretty good in the middle part of the story where he got his female fire clone and also playing around with the akatsuki and the end of the book is actually not that bad its quite satisfying because from all the work and research he done to make it and this weeding which there something happened but not gona spoil.

AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv5

Lol don't believe that guy it's pretty good right up to the end

amaturewriter:that is stupid. thx for heads up
AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv5

True. I often read mtl but I can't stand reading Pokemon Court which I was interested in

Kailour:machine translation. Kinda like if you were to put an entire chapter through google translate, yet slightly more readable. If you can stand the Engrish some of them are fine, but every once in a while you'll find one that has such god awful grammar you get a headache just from reading it.
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Ked18
Ked18Lv5

Just to be clear, I am rating the origin book and not this translation (though the translation is good, it's just too slow for me). Now, I am already about 1000 chapter in this book and it doesn't disappoint. Pros: -Not likely a harem (with what is shown, the girls will just at most be 2) -No *** scenes, just pure power building and behind the scene actions. -No gaping plothole -The characters fully encapsulate their canon selves. -Does not stick to the canon but the flow of events are very reasonable, with only some being forced. -MC is OP but not infallible. He also makes mistakes from time to time -Everyone's reaction is funny -And finally, the most notable reason why I continue reading this and anticipate for more and is in fact the main selling point of the story: Everyone's reaction when the real identity of the mc is revealed. The authors way of hiding the mc's identity is very ingenious. And how everyone tries tries but fails to see Mt. Tai in front of them is very funny. -Author also gives a very reasonable explanation why MC needs to hide his identity so he does it not just for coolness or something. Cons: -Most likely not a harem -MC's relationship with his fiancee is not fully explored. The fiancee is also treated just slightly better than background characters. In short, the romance aspect of this story is really lacking. -The experiments, although most are logical, but those with less than 1% probability or even deemed impossible can still succeed. -because some people might hate it, mc has an enemy that has power greater than him but is afraid of mc due to his bullshitting skils -MC has a limit on the growth of his tenseigan without first enacting his experiment that even until now is almost just about to complete

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