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mysticaurathings
mysticaurathingsLv14yr
2020-08-24 21:28

Amazing! <3 The story plot is superb.I really loved your writing style. Can't wait to read more of it! 😍

Magic and Martial War God

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
4.3
273 Chs

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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

Thank you

4yr
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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

My story is nowhere near perfect. It can never reach that state. But if you are here for serious character development, weak to strong, romance, hardcore battles, then you have come to the right place. Two volumes have been completed. First Volume- Massive fillers and introductions, no major character development, unexpected pace, and some boring tones. Second Volume- Sect development, character growth, rapid pace, tragedy, romance, some boring chapters, and proper story development. Basically, this novel doesn't have many things that you would like. But if you are looking for a story that has a serious story plot and story development, with lots of ups and downs, then you can join Johnny on his journey to surpass his father so that no one can manipulate him ever again.

3yr

Skywolf_1
Skywolf_1Lv13

It was good for a while Then I realised this is yet another worthless system novel Why is the system plot so popular on this app I genuinely hate system novel I feel it just ruins everything fantasy or eastern fantasy stories are all about btw It's just my personal opinion and not review for novel

3yr
bibiyenini
bibiyeniniLv3

A marvelous and applause for a great start! Martial Arts action novel is never really my thing but you broke that. Another action that will make the readers go crazy when reading this💓

4yr
Stealth95
Stealth95Lv15

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LoyalCultivator
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SAGE
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EtherealStar
EtherealStarLv15

two main problems. First is the level of writing quality. English doesn't seems to be his native langue and even for me an french with a not that good level of English grammar, it sting my eyes... The second one is the chaotic amount of techniques. He have so much bloodlines, cultivations techniques, talents at the same time. When you mix both it's very difficult to understand and follow the story.

3yr
DarkDragonGod
DarkDragonGodLv5

It's a great action-packed novel filled with interesting characters. The storyline is also interesting and not one moment is dull. Its background setting and description are also one of its strong points.

4yr
GifflarGod
GifflarGodLv14

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Aether_007
Aether_007Lv14

i like the novel till ch 180 but.. you have made the MC too naive which i did not like... i hope that you change it fast but it didn't suit a MC.. otherwise i will lose interest in the novel..

3yr
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