Item: Magic and Martial War God
Rating: 2.4
Author: GifflarGod

GifflarGodLv143yr

2021-12-26 22:09

Okay this novel first felt great but... everything goes too fast.. he gains too much too fast.. as if 1 system isn't enough.. he has 3 at this point. and then he has like too many supreme inheritances and other things.. there could easily be 3000 chapters to this novel if all these things were given at a slower pace and becoming stronger would've been at a reasonable pace... also he has too many skills and talents

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