Item: Magic and Martial War God
Rating: 5
Author: DarkDragonGod

DarkDragonGodLv54yr

2020-10-07 20:06

It's a great action-packed novel filled with interesting characters. The storyline is also interesting and not one moment is dull. Its background setting and description are also one of its strong points.

Magic and Martial War God

Sabin_Subedi_Fei

4.3

273 Chs

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My story is nowhere near perfect. It can never reach that state. But if you are here for serious character development, weak to strong, romance, hardcore battles, then you have come to the right place. Two volumes have been completed. First Volume- Massive fillers and introductions, no major character development, unexpected pace, and some boring tones. Second Volume- Sect development, character growth, rapid pace, tragedy, romance, some boring chapters, and proper story development. Basically, this novel doesn't have many things that you would like. But if you are looking for a story that has a serious story plot and story development, with lots of ups and downs, then you can join Johnny on his journey to surpass his father so that no one can manipulate him ever again.

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A marvelous and applause for a great start! Martial Arts action novel is never really my thing but you broke that. Another action that will make the readers go crazy when reading this💓

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