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Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor3yr
2021-07-03 11:20

My story is nowhere near perfect. It can never reach that state. But if you are here for serious character development, weak to strong, romance, hardcore battles, then you have come to the right place. Two volumes have been completed. First Volume- Massive fillers and introductions, no major character development, unexpected pace, and some boring tones. Second Volume- Sect development, character growth, rapid pace, tragedy, romance, some boring chapters, and proper story development. Basically, this novel doesn't have many things that you would like. But if you are looking for a story that has a serious story plot and story development, with lots of ups and downs, then you can join Johnny on his journey to surpass his father so that no one can manipulate him ever again.

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MelshanLv7

The MC Will have a wife or harém?

Pukar_GuragainLv1

author nepali ma ni nepali. pahilo xoti maile nepali webnovel reader bhetako.❤️❤️👍👍🔥🔥. Novel aba padxu hai tah mah kasto xa

ReaperashLv14

I think the sentence structure needs some work as it ruin the flow of the chapters. but its seems like a good Novel

Bernard_NutsuviLv11

So when is the continuation of the Magic Martial War God

Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

After four months. Eternal Faith-Destiny of King. But that story will be rewritten with a new plot and characters

Bernard_Nutsuvi:So when is the continuation of the Magic Martial War God
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

Single Wife

Melshan:The MC Will have a wife or harém?
Jhai_alxLv15

Will you ve continuing fighting for eternity or are you gonna hold out on it so you can have the full story for fei

Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

I will hold the final eternity for Fei. As for other projects, I will try to improve my writing through Yin-Yang Harmony System. So, don't forget to check it out.

Jhai_alx:Will you ve continuing fighting for eternity or are you gonna hold out on it so you can have the full story for fei
hermanhtLv3

I think part of the problem this novel has is you trying to put magic and cultivation together They dont realy compliment eachother that Well. I really like your other novel tower ascension though, keep up the good work :)

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