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Dragon Ball characters are mostly bricks who wouldn't even pose a threat to ywhach except perhaps a few.
I'm talking about the person making the comment not the author
Reduce the constant author's notes or at least leave it in the paragraph comments. It honestly reduces the quality of your work by having to read your yapping whilst trying to read the story.
meant to say both of those names are fine and is a far better choice
they are lightspeed. Omniman was able to fly to some unknown black hole and the closest one to earth is 1500ish lightyears away. Also he was able to fly to Planet Thraxa which is in another galaxy. The closest galaxy to ours is 2.5 million lightyears away so at the minimum he is mtfl considering he done this in what seems to be less than a year
Sung is the surname. Both Jinwoo Grayson and Jin Grayson like everyone else mentioned
b-b-but Obito is the coolest guy ever