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lordsevenLv153yr
2021-04-26 11:22

honestly I was surprised. I started this randomly, and the beginning of the story felt very generic and bland. However, soon after, the pace started picking up, the plot thickened and the story became intriguing. The characters get interesting with depth and mostly the story stopped being predictable!! it's a pretty good novel that's underrated and it keeps getting better and better.

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MellowGuyAuthor

This lovely review earned a grin from me. I'm honored that someone else sees the potential my work has. Thank you so much for the kind words! I hope I won't disappoint you all!

Jingle2612Lv4

I completely understand that’s exactly how i felt reading this it’s a little bland at the beginning but the moment it starts to pick up it turns into a hidden gem

Cute_MelonLv14

On which chapter its started to get interesting ?

Tran_AlexLv1

hihi

MellowGuy:This lovely review earned a grin from me. I'm honored that someone else sees the potential my work has. Thank you so much for the kind words! I hope I won't disappoint you all!
Tran_AlexLv1

hehe

Tran_Alex:hihi
harshit_bansalLv4

a hidden gem is better than flamboyant ore😜😜

Jingle2612: I completely understand that’s exactly how i felt reading this it’s a little bland at the beginning but the moment it starts to pick up it turns into a hidden gem
HanimatedLv1

Atleast 40% of the reviews call the mc braindead in multiple ways. Is he actually braindead? By braindead i mean making the wrong decision at every turn, for example, walking into an obvious trap just because someone asked him kindly.

DuferdLv3

Im confused why is there reincarnation tag

Phil_LivingLv4

A part of him reincarnated , hence the tag..

Duferd:Im confused why is there reincarnation tag
TheDarkReaderIsMeLv4

do you plan to have harem or romance in the novel? I'm just curious😁

MellowGuy:This lovely review earned a grin from me. I'm honored that someone else sees the potential my work has. Thank you so much for the kind words! I hope I won't disappoint you all!
superb_gamerLv2

romance or harem???

Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

MellowGuy:This lovely review earned a grin from me. I'm honored that someone else sees the potential my work has. Thank you so much for the kind words! I hope I won't disappoint you all!
nightreaper126Lv14

hey author its been a while since I read this cause I was busy but I gotta ask is dia still important to the mc arthur, is she still alive and is she travelling with him.

MellowGuy:This lovely review earned a grin from me. I'm honored that someone else sees the potential my work has. Thank you so much for the kind words! I hope I won't disappoint you all!
CharlieRiderLv4

author just one question is the mc a hero of humanity or more of an cold blooded person and not some guard dog, aurhor answer this question so i know what iam reading

MellowGuy:This lovely review earned a grin from me. I'm honored that someone else sees the potential my work has. Thank you so much for the kind words! I hope I won't disappoint you all!
Jackson_0005Lv15

Dude author can’t even answer

Bradley_KillickLv14

Is there romance? Is so harem? If so snu snu scenes? If so yuri in the harem?(mcs girls do each other) also NTR?

MellowGuy:This lovely review earned a grin from me. I'm honored that someone else sees the potential my work has. Thank you so much for the kind words! I hope I won't disappoint you all!
Phil_LivingLv4

Dia is still MC's number one.

nightreaper126:hey author its been a while since I read this cause I was busy but I gotta ask is dia still important to the mc arthur, is she still alive and is she travelling with him.
kanokiLv4

dia is still with mc, Mc is still loyal while unintentionally attracting attention and getting confessed to, but there was a chapter in one of the latest ones that may have foreshadowed a possible poly... hope not

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The author is reviewing himself, I know it's biased but one review wouldn't hurt. Plus, I'm here to give you an extra overview of the novel. English is not my first language, and I would like to apologize for any mistakes you might see. I have been writing this for almost a month, and there (currently) 47 chapters, so you can see the stability of the updates. I try to update once a day and would update more if this novel gets the top rankings (hopefully, fingers crossed). I spent most of my time on the character design and giving them depth, while also minding the originality of my novel. I don't know if I'm going the right path, but I wish you enjoy this journey no matter what. As a summary of the world, it's an age of modern magic. There are dungeons but there also magic gunmen, flying ships, and other feats of magic technology. The world is filled with dungeons and hidden dangers, and the purpose of them would be explained later down the line. The unique thing about my novel is legacies. They are contracts that transcend time and space between two people, one alive and one dead. The dead ones of the past leave a part of their will (soul) and powers in return of asking for something. The protagonist isn't the only one who have this, many do. Our protagonist, however, has a young legacy that let's him increase his strength (stats). I wrote this novel after reading many of this genre, hoping to make one that doesn't lack what others lacked, hoping for a new fun novel to emerge into the world. I'm still a newbie author, and I wish for everyone's guidance. Let's have fun together!

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