Item: Level Up Legacy
Rating: 3
Author: Xeeon

XeeonLv114yr

2020-11-08 23:45

Level 10 in Ep 40. This story is too slow peaced and I think the reason is because author want to make Ep no higher. Mc is just an ordinary person who got a system by luck. Even after he got a system, he is still ordinary. Dont get me wrong, he skills has potential just that He is not someone who is keep trying to get stronger. So, what do he do? He saves everyone he see and makes meal for them. You will also see a lot of information dump and he shows differences POV just to make the ep longer. After saving the first girl and just by eating meal together, he wants to kiss the girl when he is leaving. I have read a lot of novels and Mc in dire situation is where he do something impossible or in very extreme situations. Here? you will see a lot of almost death situations because The author wants to show character development. And He was saved by so call 'Plot Armor'. The novel is funny in so many way. I gave 3 stars because all authors should at least get it. Not because it is to my liking.

Level Up Legacy

MellowGuy

4.3

1430 Chs

Liked by 26 people

Replies6

MellowGuyAuthor

Thank you for being reasonable despite not liking the story. Levels are not a measure of his strength, his rank is. Levels are for his legacy. I never tried to make things longer than I thought they needed, I paced the story slow enough to make it enjoyable without any instant powerups. As for the mc character, I find him getting the legacy and growing up too separate things. He's a growing character, you'll come to see. Thank you again for reading it, I hope you'll continue to read so you could see how he'll grow.

4yr

HeikyZXLv3

Sorry author, but if Levels aren't his measurement for his strength, the MC would have died at the start. With the MC acting as if he had allergy of working on his powers, the level and absorption are the only things that push his forward.

MellowGuy:Thank you for being reasonable despite not liking the story. Levels are not a measure of his strength, his rank is. Levels are for his legacy. I never tried to make things longer than I thought they needed, I paced the story slow enough to make it enjoyable without any instant powerups. As for the mc character, I find him getting the legacy and growing up too separate things. He's a growing character, you'll come to see. Thank you again for reading it, I hope you'll continue to read so you could see how he'll grow.

4yr

topakLv14

i got boreD too, he has potential to be op ,but what you read is always filler

4yr

FrigridLv3

Thanks bro, you saved my time

4yr

Daoist845071Lv11

fillers are a problem indeed but try to go past the initial chaps and it gets real interesting though the fillers stays with author showing various perspectives

3yr

Captain_SpoilerLv13

I totally agree with you.. I kinda have high hope after reading this novel synopsis.. But I am quite disappointed by how slow the MC progress.. I keep coming to the review section to know when MC got stronger.. After one of the reviews said that the story got better after 100 chapters, I tried to hold up to 100+ chapters.. I try really hard to hold because it is super boring, as you said.. You can't imagine how many times I try to quit but keep holding back because I kinda see the potential of this novel as I see the similarity of this novel and "Solo Levelling." After 120+ chapters, I give up.. MC is still weak.. MC just lv20, and his strongest skill is just D-rank skill, which is still weak.. I kinda regret now.. You guys make the right decision to stop it earlier.. The slow pace of the story probably won't change until the end.. The story gets better after Ch100? Well, it is just a myth.. What is myth? Myth is a widely held but false belief or idea created by someone for fun.. If you hate the beginning, you will hate the later story as they don't change much..

1yr

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MellowGuyAuthor

The author is reviewing himself, I know it's biased but one review wouldn't hurt. Plus, I'm here to give you an extra overview of the novel. English is not my first language, and I would like to apologize for any mistakes you might see. I have been writing this for almost a month, and there (currently) 47 chapters, so you can see the stability of the updates. I try to update once a day and would update more if this novel gets the top rankings (hopefully, fingers crossed). I spent most of my time on the character design and giving them depth, while also minding the originality of my novel. I don't know if I'm going the right path, but I wish you enjoy this journey no matter what. As a summary of the world, it's an age of modern magic. There are dungeons but there also magic gunmen, flying ships, and other feats of magic technology. The world is filled with dungeons and hidden dangers, and the purpose of them would be explained later down the line. The unique thing about my novel is legacies. They are contracts that transcend time and space between two people, one alive and one dead. The dead ones of the past leave a part of their will (soul) and powers in return of asking for something. The protagonist isn't the only one who have this, many do. Our protagonist, however, has a young legacy that let's him increase his strength (stats). I wrote this novel after reading many of this genre, hoping to make one that doesn't lack what others lacked, hoping for a new fun novel to emerge into the world. I'm still a newbie author, and I wish for everyone's guidance. Let's have fun together!

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mojojo23Lv5

what's the deal with the academy or school he can become strong without it instead of making himself strong he is very weak to waste his time in school no money and weak but he still go to school for what?? to flaunt he is awakened this is pure bullshit just to add academy or school ,......................................................[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]..........

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