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Daoist814941
Daoist814941Lv114yr
2020-10-29 04:09

I enjoy reading honestly reviews and I think I should provide one. as of chapter 30, the MC is given an amazing ability and is coming from a place of no ability in a world of super powers. what does he do? does he plan, learn, and be cautious while growing stronger? no, he is greedy and only survives due to luck and plot armour. it is disappointing seeing how the mc can be aware of his fragility and still rush into death like an idiot. I dislike seeing the other perspectives and even skip them because I don't care about these other individuals. it is a good story compared to a lot of other garbage on here but no where near flawless.

Level Up Legacy

MellowGuy
4.3
1420 Chs

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MellowGuy
MellowGuyAuthor

Hi! First of all, thank you for reading and reviewing my novel. Secondly, I'm not so arrogant to think I'm the best writer under the heavens or something. I'm a newbie, to be honest. My novel being flawed is understandable. In regard to Arthur's character in the first volume, it was supposed to be flawed. You could see he's not the brightest of people, he's naive, and he's impulsive. It's a part of who he is at that time. He's not a reincarnator or an ancient character, but an eighteen-year-old dirt digger who's been granted such a power that he fails to realize its importance. It's really a part of the character design for him to grow out of this. As for your mention of plot armor, I think it's true that Arthur was lucky. He's not of great fate because I'm telling his story, but it's the opposite. I'm telling his story because he's of great fate. Many foreshadowing in the first arc could be picked up in very advanced chapters. You can see that clearly, as weird things begin to happen after a certain amount of time that even Arthur picks up. As for other perspectives, I really wish you'd read them. They tell what's happening from a different perspective. They tell why some things to Arthur. However, it's still your call to read whatever you like. I'm just glad you're reading at all. I really, can't stress this enough, thank you for this review. You've taken the time to properly analyze this story and I can't help but be grateful. I'll also pin this for others to see.

4yr
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Dana_Brew
Dana_BrewLv4

you know in a world of superpower... someone like mc was supposed to be more aware of how "scary" the world is rather than transmigrator/reincarnator

MellowGuy:Hi! First of all, thank you for reading and reviewing my novel. Secondly, I'm not so arrogant to think I'm the best writer under the heavens or something. I'm a newbie, to be honest. My novel being flawed is understandable. In regard to Arthur's character in the first volume, it was supposed to be flawed. You could see he's not the brightest of people, he's naive, and he's impulsive. It's a part of who he is at that time. He's not a reincarnator or an ancient character, but an eighteen-year-old dirt digger who's been granted such a power that he fails to realize its importance. It's really a part of the character design for him to grow out of this. As for your mention of plot armor, I think it's true that Arthur was lucky. He's not of great fate because I'm telling his story, but it's the opposite. I'm telling his story because he's of great fate. Many foreshadowing in the first arc could be picked up in very advanced chapters. You can see that clearly, as weird things begin to happen after a certain amount of time that even Arthur picks up. As for other perspectives, I really wish you'd read them. They tell what's happening from a different perspective. They tell why some things to Arthur. However, it's still your call to read whatever you like. I'm just glad you're reading at all. I really, can't stress this enough, thank you for this review. You've taken the time to properly analyze this story and I can't help but be grateful. I'll also pin this for others to see.
4yr
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LordKittyCat
LordKittyCatLv4

That’s true

4yr
2
PoeticSonic
PoeticSonicLv4

you would be surprised how easily people can be ignorant about the world they are in...

Dana_Brew:you know in a world of superpower... someone like mc was supposed to be more aware of how "scary" the world is rather than transmigrator/reincarnator
4yr
6
Mr_Babbles
Mr_BabblesLv15

I love that, "he is not of great fate because I'm telling the story, I'm telling the story because he's of great fate", I think I'm gonna read it now

MellowGuy:Hi! First of all, thank you for reading and reviewing my novel. Secondly, I'm not so arrogant to think I'm the best writer under the heavens or something. I'm a newbie, to be honest. My novel being flawed is understandable. In regard to Arthur's character in the first volume, it was supposed to be flawed. You could see he's not the brightest of people, he's naive, and he's impulsive. It's a part of who he is at that time. He's not a reincarnator or an ancient character, but an eighteen-year-old dirt digger who's been granted such a power that he fails to realize its importance. It's really a part of the character design for him to grow out of this. As for your mention of plot armor, I think it's true that Arthur was lucky. He's not of great fate because I'm telling his story, but it's the opposite. I'm telling his story because he's of great fate. Many foreshadowing in the first arc could be picked up in very advanced chapters. You can see that clearly, as weird things begin to happen after a certain amount of time that even Arthur picks up. As for other perspectives, I really wish you'd read them. They tell what's happening from a different perspective. They tell why some things to Arthur. However, it's still your call to read whatever you like. I'm just glad you're reading at all. I really, can't stress this enough, thank you for this review. You've taken the time to properly analyze this story and I can't help but be grateful. I'll also pin this for others to see.
3yr
5
DEADND
DEADNDLv11

me reading a novel (immaculate spirit) and then this novel points out the one child and two child policy in china where females from nearby countries are smgguled to give birth to a male heir yea we all are very ignorant about our world

PoeticSonic:you would be surprised how easily people can be ignorant about the world they are in...
3yr
5
pheonixblue01
pheonixblue01Lv15

It’s not bad, you just have to be willing to sit through Arthur doing dumb things all of the time and then ending up in the orher world and starting from scratch for chapter 275. After 400+ chapters, the pace has slowed down to a couple of chapters a week and the story isn’t as interesting to me because it’s just the same racist/elitist/evil enemies, it doesn’t seem like he’s even trying to go back to Earth, and even if he does then the bad guys will likely be magically unbeatable again.

3yr
2
Dubois_Stewart
Dubois_StewartLv12

Ugh, i guess i'll go back to Supremacy Games, Shadow Slave, and Dimensional Descent till i catch up again. I really tried.

pheonixblue01:It’s not bad, you just have to be willing to sit through Arthur doing dumb things all of the time and then ending up in the orher world and starting from scratch for chapter 275. After 400+ chapters, the pace has slowed down to a couple of chapters a week and the story isn’t as interesting to me because it’s just the same racist/elitist/evil enemies, it doesn’t seem like he’s even trying to go back to Earth, and even if he does then the bad guys will likely be magically unbeatable again.
1yr
vanactuvavancliv
vanactuvavanclivLv14

is dimensional descent good? i’ve read like 30 chapters but i didn’t really like the mc does he get better? should i keep reading. also i mainly read shadow slave and lord of mysteries but i haven’t found much else i like they don’t need to be the same genre or anything. it just seems most things on here aren’t very well writte or pale in comparison. ill probably start this book too in a few days ive just been reading reviews to see if i should and i noticed you mention another novel i like.

Dubois_Stewart:Ugh, i guess i'll go back to Supremacy Games, Shadow Slave, and Dimensional Descent till i catch up again. I really tried.
1yr
Solar_Horizon
Solar_HorizonLv11

What a good response...

MellowGuy:Hi! First of all, thank you for reading and reviewing my novel. Secondly, I'm not so arrogant to think I'm the best writer under the heavens or something. I'm a newbie, to be honest. My novel being flawed is understandable. In regard to Arthur's character in the first volume, it was supposed to be flawed. You could see he's not the brightest of people, he's naive, and he's impulsive. It's a part of who he is at that time. He's not a reincarnator or an ancient character, but an eighteen-year-old dirt digger who's been granted such a power that he fails to realize its importance. It's really a part of the character design for him to grow out of this. As for your mention of plot armor, I think it's true that Arthur was lucky. He's not of great fate because I'm telling his story, but it's the opposite. I'm telling his story because he's of great fate. Many foreshadowing in the first arc could be picked up in very advanced chapters. You can see that clearly, as weird things begin to happen after a certain amount of time that even Arthur picks up. As for other perspectives, I really wish you'd read them. They tell what's happening from a different perspective. They tell why some things to Arthur. However, it's still your call to read whatever you like. I'm just glad you're reading at all. I really, can't stress this enough, thank you for this review. You've taken the time to properly analyze this story and I can't help but be grateful. I'll also pin this for others to see.
1yr
kennykangaroo2
kennykangaroo2Lv4

That kiss scene was so abrupt, it just shook me to the core with how utterly ridiculous it was. Glad someone else gave it some mind. I dropped the novel not that long later, given how slow the pacing was. The MC was barely leveling up, and the author still had him exploring the wilderness while leveling up. The author needed to break up that repetitive writing with something else, as it just started feeling samey and just blended together.

6mth
2
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