honestly I was surprised. I started this randomly, and the beginning of the story felt very generic and bland. However, soon after, the pace started picking up, the plot thickened and the story became intriguing. The characters get interesting with depth and mostly the story stopped being predictable!! it's a pretty good novel that's underrated and it keeps getting better and better.

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The story jumps and skips around randomly. In the middle of things it always, ALWAYS, jumps away so that nothing ever feels satisfying. This is exactly the worst way to write a book. The MC, meanwhile, is a total beta. He's the kind of guy that would watch his girlfriend get f*cked because somebody asked him politely. He's led around by the nose by the author. The greatest proof that he's just a follower is that he is constantly getting bullied by the author to go here or do that without any rhyme or reason, and he does it even though his own character should have chosen something else. That's the problem. Never once does this character make a judgement that he would have made on his own and stuck with it. He's just the authors puppet.

I enjoy reading honestly reviews and I think I should provide one. as of chapter 30, the MC is given an amazing ability and is coming from a place of no ability in a world of super powers. what does he do? does he plan, learn, and be cautious while growing stronger? no, he is greedy and only survives due to luck and plot armour. it is disappointing seeing how the mc can be aware of his fragility and still rush into death like an idiot. I dislike seeing the other perspectives and even skip them because I don't care about these other individuals. it is a good story compared to a lot of other garbage on here but no where near flawless.

The author is reviewing himself, I know it's biased but one review wouldn't hurt. Plus, I'm here to give you an extra overview of the novel. English is not my first language, and I would like to apologize for any mistakes you might see. I have been writing this for almost a month, and there (currently) 47 chapters, so you can see the stability of the updates. I try to update once a day and would update more if this novel gets the top rankings (hopefully, fingers crossed). I spent most of my time on the character design and giving them depth, while also minding the originality of my novel. I don't know if I'm going the right path, but I wish you enjoy this journey no matter what. As a summary of the world, it's an age of modern magic. There are dungeons but there also magic gunmen, flying ships, and other feats of magic technology. The world is filled with dungeons and hidden dangers, and the purpose of them would be explained later down the line. The unique thing about my novel is legacies. They are contracts that transcend time and space between two people, one alive and one dead. The dead ones of the past leave a part of their will (soul) and powers in return of asking for something. The protagonist isn't the only one who have this, many do. Our protagonist, however, has a young legacy that let's him increase his strength (stats). I wrote this novel after reading many of this genre, hoping to make one that doesn't lack what others lacked, hoping for a new fun novel to emerge into the world. I'm still a newbie author, and I wish for everyone's guidance. Let's have fun together!

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Hello. Author is here again with another review. I think there are more than 180 chapters right now, so I thought more people need to see this. Read the first review to understand the gist of my novel. I admit that the first volume, that is 52 chapters, is not as ideal as it can be. Some people mentioned that vagueness of the novel, but there's a mystery tag so you'd have to stick around to understand everything this novel is about. Others mentioned plot-armor, which I find not as overused as they think. There are many things that are a foreshadowing for later events and everything would be linked together. Anyone who read until the latest chapters knows that some of those events happened for a reason the MC didn't know about. There's some change in POVs that happened early on, but would get very rare later. Please understand. Thank you. I just wanted to clairfy this so that you, whoever is interested, to give this novel a chance to prove itself.

In starting it's felt like Solo leveling but later turned out to be a unique and interesting novel. ,🤔🤔🤔🤔🤓🤓🤓😶🤔😓😏😏😤😈😈👋⚰️🤢🤢😡🖐️🤓🤔🙄💩😱👍👮👮🚓👍🏻😋😋😷😎🤢😡🖐️🖐️