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Heh_HehLv43yr
2021-06-02 08:46

At first, the book was quite mediocre. I didn’t think much of it and expected nothing special. HOWEVER, after about 100 chapters, the story picked up and I was utterly enthralled. I couldn’t keep my nose out of this beautiful piece of art. There are some mistakes throughout, but all of its good qualities far outweigh any inconvenience a reader comes across. Seeing everything come together and trying to guess what the protagonist is thinking is incredibly exhilarating. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep it up Author. Bless you and your beautiful mind.

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MellowGuyAuthor

I'm grateful that you gave this book a proper chance to shine. Thank you so much for reading and for the lovely review.

Shamir_RimalLv11

Romance?

Slaiyn_TheocracyLv1

but the authors other book fate system is pretty great

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newnew968Lv14

Is there romace ??

Link_wolfLv2

romance?

MellowGuy:I'm grateful that you gave this book a proper chance to shine. Thank you so much for reading and for the lovely review.
KottuRotiLv12

Is there harem in this novel?I dont like harem thats why.

idvieon_04Lv2

yeah me too

KottuRoti:Is there harem in this novel?I dont like harem thats why.
Slaiyn_TheocracyLv1

**85

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Cute_MelonLv14

Sigh. . Everything is good before he was transferred to Solomon world. . Drop it bye.

MastariusLv2

LoL after 100 chapters?, do you have 1000 years lifespan?... to waste days before you decide to continue or stop....wth...?

Heh_HehLv4

100 chapters is like a bus ride of reading for me, sorry

Mastarius:LoL after 100 chapters?, do you have 1000 years lifespan?... to waste days before you decide to continue or stop....wth...?
IstanStraykids1Lv1

fr, especially after getting used to reading novels with more than 1000 chap ters

Heh_Heh:100 chapters is like a bus ride of reading for me, sorry
Terrance_ColemanLv15

Hopefully there is!

Shamir_Rimal:Romance?
dylan_pyleLv14

hopefully not it ruins

Terrance_Coleman:Hopefully there is!
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MellowGuyAuthor

The author is reviewing himself, I know it's biased but one review wouldn't hurt. Plus, I'm here to give you an extra overview of the novel. English is not my first language, and I would like to apologize for any mistakes you might see. I have been writing this for almost a month, and there (currently) 47 chapters, so you can see the stability of the updates. I try to update once a day and would update more if this novel gets the top rankings (hopefully, fingers crossed). I spent most of my time on the character design and giving them depth, while also minding the originality of my novel. I don't know if I'm going the right path, but I wish you enjoy this journey no matter what. As a summary of the world, it's an age of modern magic. There are dungeons but there also magic gunmen, flying ships, and other feats of magic technology. The world is filled with dungeons and hidden dangers, and the purpose of them would be explained later down the line. The unique thing about my novel is legacies. They are contracts that transcend time and space between two people, one alive and one dead. The dead ones of the past leave a part of their will (soul) and powers in return of asking for something. The protagonist isn't the only one who have this, many do. Our protagonist, however, has a young legacy that let's him increase his strength (stats). I wrote this novel after reading many of this genre, hoping to make one that doesn't lack what others lacked, hoping for a new fun novel to emerge into the world. I'm still a newbie author, and I wish for everyone's guidance. Let's have fun together!

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