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QTiLv34yr
2020-06-07 18:58

At the beginning of the story it was very good and interesting, but after returning to his family it became somewhat boring, and the events became worse and misunderstood. It seems to me that you put everything in the foreground and left the rest. I understand that you publish 3 chapters per day, but the quality is my brother even if it is a chapter in Today, just as you were in the beginning of 30 chapters, your skills situation in the classroom was something that I do not need to see (I apologize for the grammatical errors and rules I hope I can read)

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rockinroll39Lv5

as someone who just to the "returning to family" part. do they ever remember him? or is he doomed to depression because nobody remembers him?

emradeLv4

Yeah! I felt the same, my interest in the book started to diminish after he got back home. The first few chapters (Island arc) was the best for me. Just saying 😁

BartothegreatLv14

seems to be a common thing when a big part of the story has the MC reuiniting with family, it just is boring. Why I prefer when the MC is an orphan, or just wants nothing to do with the family

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