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Nam_PhanLv24yr
2020-05-31 00:06

This story overall could’ve done better. The overall plot is short and if you ask me, could’ve had much more potential. You see, personally, MC’s can act dumb and give out information and just waste their time helping others only if they have an advantage and OP, for example, everyone in this novel has the exact same powers, rather it’s about insight, luck and circumstances. Everyone has a system, everyone can gain abilities, learn and use tomes. The biggest issue though is how bland it gets later on, getting back to the point where it was short and could’ve been better. First off, he literally helps and tells very special information to a stranger that can’t provide as much support as others, just a random filler to get some information about the areas, in exchange for information that is probably more valuable than many tomes and overall just a bland filler. Why can’t you just get the MC up and started, be more efficient and get him to his family?

Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)

ExSoldierLv99
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758 Chs

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Nam_PhanLv2

P.S. Wheres the unlimited power? Should’ve been put near the start, like infinite mana and power! Woahhh😎

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Nam_PhanLv2

P.s. I’m probably dropping this novel, might come back time to time

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This is amazing I wish he stayed on the island longer though and that there were stronger sea creatures like a craken or a turtle island and other cool things

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YAOIGIRLFANLv10

It’s very good if I say so myself the overall development is pretty good in and of itself the characters are good as well and I can’t wait for more 👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾🙏🏾😍

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AriosAeonVonBelserLv4

The MC really likes to be a slave huh? He follows everyones order. He teach anyone his magic. And he make extremely foolish decision like convincing his enemy to become his ally. For gods sake your not Naruto so don't use talk no jutsu cuase you suck at it. Because of this foolishness, this cause the life of his friend and trauma to Yuki. Also didn't he already teach his country men how to use magic? Why is he still teaching them can't hey experiment for themselves on how to use magic didn't he already said that the basic is hard but once you got the hang of it, it will become extremely easy to use magic and the MC's ally rely on him too much. They wanted weapon they go to the MC, they wanted to learn something they go to MC and the MC is just okay with halting or slowing his progress in magic. Honestly I just wan't the to have a love interest who can fight alongside with him and his ally can die for all I care cause they are just there to slow down the progress of the mc.

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AmbroshusLv2

Awesome start....author got lazy after 40 chapters to the point where the story feels like it's just floating in the air and you can forget it in a day.

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QTiLv3

At the beginning of the story it was very good and interesting, but after returning to his family it became somewhat boring, and the events became worse and misunderstood. It seems to me that you put everything in the foreground and left the rest. I understand that you publish 3 chapters per day, but the quality is my brother even if it is a chapter in Today, just as you were in the beginning of 30 chapters, your skills situation in the classroom was something that I do not need to see (I apologize for the grammatical errors and rules I hope I can read)

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