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One note, though: the beginning was actually good—especially the Shen family conspiracy.

After 300-250 chapters, I can safely say this novel is complete nonsense. Its whole formula is built on creating annoyance for the reader, then throwing in a “face-slapping” moment as if that somehow makes up for it—but the annoyance never actually stops. It’s like the author keeps releasing a fly to buzz in your ear, then expects you to enjoy the story just because the protagonist slapped someone afterward. There’s no real logic in how relationships or conflicts are written: either you are with the protagonist, or against him. Everyone against him hates him for no convincing reason, and everyone on his side likes him or supports him for no sufficient reason. That kind of writing is incredibly frustrating, because it doesn’t build characters—it just assigns roles. The author doesn’t want you to understand the enemies or find them believable; he just wants you to hate them automatically. And in contrast, he pushes you to feel the protagonist’s “kindness” and “good nature” in certain scenes, like the way he treats his stepmother. But that isn’t depth—it’s just forced emotional manipulation. The worst part, though, is the fake intelligence followed by its absurd destruction. The author spent 300 whole chapters building up an enemy for the protagonist and showed him as intelligent, cunning, and ruthless. Then the moment he actually became the protagonist’s direct enemy, all of that instantly collapsed and he turned into a complete idiot. That isn’t dramatic downfall—it’s blatant character sabotage. The problem is that the novel doesn’t have a single respectable villain or a real opponent with actual weight. Everyone suffers from “100000-IQ” whenever the plot needs it. Because of that, every confrontation feels worthless, since you already know that any enemy character will lose all their brains the moment it’s time for the protagonist to win. In short: this novel doesn’t deserve its rating. Honestly, even a 2 is too generous for it.

Well, well, I’ve read about 200–300 chapters of it—not completely sure—but there really isn’t any truly smart real antagonist except his cousin before he becomes his enemy. And once he does become his enemy, he takes a negative 100,000 hit to his IQ. I got sick of him. I honestly thought he was finally going to be a good villain, but like the rest of Chinese novels, the IQ level is really annoyingly bad. And don’t even get me started on Su Jingguo or whatever her name is—the author just keeps trying to annoy the reader, then gets rid of that annoyance only to create a new one.

Note I feel that it will be deleted from the author

write 3 good i think? Downloading 4 chapters, one per day, very good, the development of the story is not really great, 80 chapters, I did not see anything new, only an additional character doing some things and taking the role of Goku. I was expecting something better, especially the Planet Namek event. I did not feel that it was exciting. You could have made it better. Character design 2 Reason ? Because it is one character, there is really nothing else, and it is somewhat naive. I love evil characters and plots. The background of World 3 is nothing new. There was some explanation, but it still did not leave your own touch, and this is a pity.

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