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LORD_OF_ORIGIN
LORD_OF_ORIGINLv44yr
2020-06-05 18:16

Well it's somewhat like 'Everybody Else Is A Returnee'......................................................................................

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SirLobo93
SirLobo93Lv13

Was literally thinking the same thing 😂 but I kinda don't want to see a novel only about a man living for so long only interacting with beasts even if it's good it's be short

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3Lv10

I do maybe he can make the beasts evolve so he can mate with them( I mean female beast obviously)

SirLobo93:Was literally thinking the same thing 😂 but I kinda don't want to see a novel only about a man living for so long only interacting with beasts even if it's good it's be short
ClicheWriter
ClicheWriterLv3

Dude, plz stahp. Don't want to go in that rabbit hole

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:I do maybe he can make the beasts evolve so he can mate with them( I mean female beast obviously)
ClicheWriter
ClicheWriterLv3

The synopsis is very similar to that novel.

PingPong23
PingPong23Lv4

Harem?

PingPong23
PingPong23Lv4

Harem?

SirLobo93
SirLobo93Lv13

I don't wanna kink shame but I'm highly tempted!

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:I do maybe he can make the beasts evolve so he can mate with them( I mean female beast obviously)
SirLobo93
SirLobo93Lv13

I don't wanna kink shame but I'm highly tempted!

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:I do maybe he can make the beasts evolve so he can mate with them( I mean female beast obviously)
EkOmkar
EkOmkarLv10

It was a gud novel

EkOmkar
EkOmkarLv10

It was a gud novel

JKingSniper
JKingSniperLv6

ye same

Caredevil
CaredevilLv14

Agree

LittleWuxia
LittleWuxiaLv5

Monster/beast harem?

Darkload
DarkloadLv13

I want ^.^ :P

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:I do maybe he can make the beasts evolve so he can mate with them( I mean female beast obviously)
Adolf
AdolfLv13

💀 are you into that???

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:I do maybe he can make the beasts evolve so he can mate with them( I mean female beast obviously)
Narutoss5
Narutoss5Lv13

if you are a man of culture i can see where you are going...

ClicheWriter:Dude, plz stahp. Don't want to go in that rabbit hole
Sycamore
SycamoreLv3

Exactly what I thought when I saw the synopsis

ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

Thinking the same thing I read that whole and loved it

Hahalool
HahaloolLv14

Lmao Literally...don’t go for the rabbit hole :))

ClicheWriter:Dude, plz stahp. Don't want to go in that rabbit hole
ScottyForsythe
ScottyForsytheLv6

No, plz, no. I'm having Vietnam flashbacks =_=

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:I do maybe he can make the beasts evolve so he can mate with them( I mean female beast obviously)
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Heretoc
HeretocLv4

The story is absurd. I am currently at chapter 110 and all I can say is this story is a waste of brain cells. Not going to suggest this story to anyone. It starts with a scenario similar to Everyone else is a returnee. But that's it. The story just goes off tangent and stops making any sense. To give you an idea I will briefly explain what the **** has me ranting about. MC is a loner invisible guy. Time stops and he is left alone. He spends 300 years acting as an idiot. Instead of training his skill or enjoying himself, all you find him is crying about his past and how he seems to forget everything. Fine. We can understand that MC is depressed and so on. But 300 years? And let's not forget all the time skips. Author just out of nowhere drops a time skip. 10 yeast passed, they practiced for 20 years...it's annoying. And then you have the author mucking about. She's trying for comedic effects, but he is trying so hard that all that comes out is depression. God Realm where the arc stops making any sense. It's so wrong....I don't even know what to say. You have mind locks, NPCs and other stuff which just DO NOT merge well into the story. And when people do come alive the story just goes bat **** insane. Do you remember how hard was it to find magic stones? Well, the story starts and you have 'The player who first entered the game.' Do you get it? Player who entered the game. You don't have people awakening and then hyperventilating because every thing is wrong. Nope. It's a game . The first player than purchases magic stones, few million magic stones mind you. WTF? Are you writing a VR game novel or are you talking about real world. You don't have anyone rioting, crying, screaming. No cults preaching Apocalypse. No military efforts to bring every thing in control. No common man trying to kill himself because he just list everything. Nope. It's just another day. Everything is normal. People immediate adapted to this whole fucking game world. You already have guild and villages. Hunters using mechas and what not. Like seriously? If all you wanted was a game world then why didn't the **** you just created a VR novel. No sense of realism. And if that wasn't enough. The same MC who was crying for his crush and his parents, didn't even think about visiting them. It's not like I wish he would. But what's with all this inconsistent character development. After chapter 100, when people awaken, the MC starts acting like an NPC. Which honestly makes no sense. If it was like they legendary Mechanic where he acted like NPC to earn benefits, I could under. But this ...rubbish. All I cay say is : Waste of time. It's just around 250 chapters long but I was already feeling drowsy 100 chapters in. The stupid change was just the final hammer. Not going to suggest this story. Ever.

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