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SMomoTempest
SMomoTempestLv144yr
2020-06-06 00:40

This Novel give me the "Everyone is a returner" vibe, but much more interesting with lot of adventures and action...and the MC is.....really 😜....

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Ligare
LigareLv12

Reading the summary, I thought it WAS Everyone is A Returnee.

needmorechapters
needmorechaptersLv4

MC is really...and? Pervert?

AIex
AIexLv12

Exactly

Shadow_XYZ
Shadow_XYZLv4

Yow I have one question does the mc abilities is op like the mc in everyone else is a returnee

Mytici
MyticiLv14

I hope he does. Everyone else is a returnee was my s***

Shadow_XYZ:Yow I have one question does the mc abilities is op like the mc in everyone else is a returnee
Karma
KarmaLv14

Yea I got those vibes from reading the synopsis

CONCUSSIONARMY
CONCUSSIONARMYLv4

same.

Ligare:Reading the summary, I thought it WAS Everyone is A Returnee.
Jannah28
Jannah28Lv10

heheehe

Jinrou
JinrouLv12

First few chapters are straight out of "Everyone Is a returnee" but the pace and development gets a bit different. It's still a "system" story, where the protagonist "gets abandoned by God in a world with no humans where creatures evolve'. This is a fast food type novel. I'm not sure why so many people are saying it's "better" than everyone is a returnee. It really is not, at best, it's at the same level. Personally I liked everyone else is a returnee much more, after reading ~50 chapters I dropped it.

Kanchi_Kannan
Kanchi_KannanLv12

exactly

GReREEN
GReREENLv3

no way its better EER was sooooooooo good I want it know how it is so called better

MyMajesty
MyMajestyLv1

Blasphemy!

Mytici:I hope he does. Everyone else is a returnee was my s***
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15

the similarities end pretty quickly, this whole novel becomes one big mind f*** later on, but you start getting hints of it from like chapter 50 or 60 onwards.. honestly it feels uncomfortable to read at points, because it makes you question the reality of the novel... if you've ever seen the movie paprika, it kinda gives you same uncomfortable feeling of being unable the distinguish reality

who_cares0101
who_cares0101Lv13

I found that too, at points it just didn't seem to be the same novel

Dreamstrafe:the similarities end pretty quickly, this whole novel becomes one big mind f*** later on, but you start getting hints of it from like chapter 50 or 60 onwards.. honestly it feels uncomfortable to read at points, because it makes you question the reality of the novel... if you've ever seen the movie paprika, it kinda gives you same uncomfortable feeling of being unable the distinguish reality
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15

i ended up dropping it, cause i don't want to read a novel that's totally just gonna end out being some kind of wacky dream or something like that. (though I didn't read ahead, I'm usually pretty good at predicting a lot of novels)

who_cares0101:I found that too, at points it just didn't seem to be the same novel
who_cares0101
who_cares0101Lv13

yeah, I got to like chapter 300 and it gets ridiculous. It was mainly cuz I felt I've already read so much might aswell continue, and I was bored. But I did find the concept interesting ( basically the same as everyone else is a returnee). I read it cuz I wanted to learn more of the 500 years he spent alone, cuz in ** they just skipped that in a few chapters whereas this one it was basically just that time.

Dreamstrafe:i ended up dropping it, cause i don't want to read a novel that's totally just gonna end out being some kind of wacky dream or something like that. (though I didn't read ahead, I'm usually pretty good at predicting a lot of novels)
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Heretoc
HeretocLv4

The story is absurd. I am currently at chapter 110 and all I can say is this story is a waste of brain cells. Not going to suggest this story to anyone. It starts with a scenario similar to Everyone else is a returnee. But that's it. The story just goes off tangent and stops making any sense. To give you an idea I will briefly explain what the **** has me ranting about. MC is a loner invisible guy. Time stops and he is left alone. He spends 300 years acting as an idiot. Instead of training his skill or enjoying himself, all you find him is crying about his past and how he seems to forget everything. Fine. We can understand that MC is depressed and so on. But 300 years? And let's not forget all the time skips. Author just out of nowhere drops a time skip. 10 yeast passed, they practiced for 20 years...it's annoying. And then you have the author mucking about. She's trying for comedic effects, but he is trying so hard that all that comes out is depression. God Realm where the arc stops making any sense. It's so wrong....I don't even know what to say. You have mind locks, NPCs and other stuff which just DO NOT merge well into the story. And when people do come alive the story just goes bat **** insane. Do you remember how hard was it to find magic stones? Well, the story starts and you have 'The player who first entered the game.' Do you get it? Player who entered the game. You don't have people awakening and then hyperventilating because every thing is wrong. Nope. It's a game . The first player than purchases magic stones, few million magic stones mind you. WTF? Are you writing a VR game novel or are you talking about real world. You don't have anyone rioting, crying, screaming. No cults preaching Apocalypse. No military efforts to bring every thing in control. No common man trying to kill himself because he just list everything. Nope. It's just another day. Everything is normal. People immediate adapted to this whole fucking game world. You already have guild and villages. Hunters using mechas and what not. Like seriously? If all you wanted was a game world then why didn't the **** you just created a VR novel. No sense of realism. And if that wasn't enough. The same MC who was crying for his crush and his parents, didn't even think about visiting them. It's not like I wish he would. But what's with all this inconsistent character development. After chapter 100, when people awaken, the MC starts acting like an NPC. Which honestly makes no sense. If it was like they legendary Mechanic where he acted like NPC to earn benefits, I could under. But this ...rubbish. All I cay say is : Waste of time. It's just around 250 chapters long but I was already feeling drowsy 100 chapters in. The stupid change was just the final hammer. Not going to suggest this story. Ever.

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