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Kerail
KerailLv124yr
2020-06-06 15:10

Oddly overy good reviews here. For me the free chapters left feeling like its bad copy of "Everyone Else is a Returnee". Unlike Returnee humans are left on Earth in protected state like statues. Only mc goes on living. Reading onward leaves me thinking that most of those statues die the moment time stop is lifted. Next I do not like the mc development. There are lot of time skips. So many development skips that writer himself forgets numbers and developments now and then. Thats why I really cant feel for the mc. Mc low presence (reason that even god left gim out) is not there in real novel development. It is just mentioned now and then when he thinks about his life before or about time during novel time skips. I may have rated this novel as ok to read if I had not read "Everyone Else is a Returnee". So if you want to enyoy this novel dont read the original beforehand.

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ForFunWorld
ForFunWorldLv13

Bro seem like only you understand me 😢i can't stand it anymore. Just read 15 chapter has take all my willpower. What i aspect is this novel get better and better but what i get is getting worse to even worse. What even more bewildered is that everyone seem like this novel.

ForFunWorld
ForFunWorldLv13

Bro seem like only you understand me 😢i can't stand it anymore. Just read 15 chapter has take all my willpower. What i aspect is this novel get better and better but what i get is getting worse to even worse. What even more bewildered is that everyone seem like this novel.

Madking
MadkingLv5

It freaking baffles me how there are good reviews. Actually kept reading thinking it was going to get better. It didn't. Let's just stick to 'everyone is a returnee'

ForFunWorld:Bro seem like only you understand me 😢i can't stand it anymore. Just read 15 chapter has take all my willpower. What i aspect is this novel get better and better but what i get is getting worse to even worse. What even more bewildered is that everyone seem like this novel.
Sage_of_PantyShot
Sage_of_PantyShotLv3

same here! I felt like my intelligence is deteriorating while reading this novel😂 The story has a potential but that's it! Even more infuriating is that, the MC wasted too many opportunities! for 100 years! only got 1 cultivation skill! and he doesn't even have a single defensive skill! I also noticed that the mc's adaptability is close to nill! and there's his problem about his memory. The Qi should improves his body at a molecular level right? then he should gained a Photographic memory right?😂 if not a partial one, but he didn't instead of improving his mind it kept decreasing his IQ. It's hilarious when how he kept thinking about Li qiqi getting a soul, His belief is that an A.I can gain a soul just by interacting with humans.

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Heretoc
HeretocLv4

The story is absurd. I am currently at chapter 110 and all I can say is this story is a waste of brain cells. Not going to suggest this story to anyone. It starts with a scenario similar to Everyone else is a returnee. But that's it. The story just goes off tangent and stops making any sense. To give you an idea I will briefly explain what the **** has me ranting about. MC is a loner invisible guy. Time stops and he is left alone. He spends 300 years acting as an idiot. Instead of training his skill or enjoying himself, all you find him is crying about his past and how he seems to forget everything. Fine. We can understand that MC is depressed and so on. But 300 years? And let's not forget all the time skips. Author just out of nowhere drops a time skip. 10 yeast passed, they practiced for 20 years...it's annoying. And then you have the author mucking about. She's trying for comedic effects, but he is trying so hard that all that comes out is depression. God Realm where the arc stops making any sense. It's so wrong....I don't even know what to say. You have mind locks, NPCs and other stuff which just DO NOT merge well into the story. And when people do come alive the story just goes bat **** insane. Do you remember how hard was it to find magic stones? Well, the story starts and you have 'The player who first entered the game.' Do you get it? Player who entered the game. You don't have people awakening and then hyperventilating because every thing is wrong. Nope. It's a game . The first player than purchases magic stones, few million magic stones mind you. WTF? Are you writing a VR game novel or are you talking about real world. You don't have anyone rioting, crying, screaming. No cults preaching Apocalypse. No military efforts to bring every thing in control. No common man trying to kill himself because he just list everything. Nope. It's just another day. Everything is normal. People immediate adapted to this whole fucking game world. You already have guild and villages. Hunters using mechas and what not. Like seriously? If all you wanted was a game world then why didn't the **** you just created a VR novel. No sense of realism. And if that wasn't enough. The same MC who was crying for his crush and his parents, didn't even think about visiting them. It's not like I wish he would. But what's with all this inconsistent character development. After chapter 100, when people awaken, the MC starts acting like an NPC. Which honestly makes no sense. If it was like they legendary Mechanic where he acted like NPC to earn benefits, I could under. But this ...rubbish. All I cay say is : Waste of time. It's just around 250 chapters long but I was already feeling drowsy 100 chapters in. The stupid change was just the final hammer. Not going to suggest this story. Ever.

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