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littlemist
littlemistLv54yr
2020-06-05 22:36

Like someone else said, the concept is fairly similar to Everybody Else is a Trainee. This review is based on the free chapters only. Honestly, I don't think this is that good, but it's decent enough to pass the time with if you're bored I guess. The main problem I have is with the MC. He adapts pretty quickly in the beginning, not doubting or confirming things for himself, and completely taking things in stride without seemingly any reaction a normal person would have. And he assumes a lot of things without any basis or proof, which makes the developments seem forced. The plot also goes by pretty quickly, and although that may be necessary considering that there's five hundred years of ground needing to be covered, it still feels like the time skips happen too fast and too often. Like in the first few chapters it's hey three years go by, hey ten years of travel goes by, and it just feels wayyyyyy too quick and a bit of a cop out. In general I think those are the main problems. I can get over the time skips since I guess they sort of make sense for the current point in the plot, but I really am not a fan of the MC. He honestly just doesn't feel very realistic. After living many years it makes sense, but since it started from the beginning and there are so many time skips that doesn't really allow for character development to be written out, it ends up with him still feeling like a very unrealistic character.

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Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3Lv10

I don't like that book it's trash to me and plus it's a harem

mcbooth23
mcbooth23Lv15

The title its returnee not trainee

littlemist
littlemistLv5

you're right! oops :P dunno what was going through my head when i wrote that lol

mcbooth23:The title its returnee not trainee
emry
emryLv5

fellow daoist if you ever wanna read the locked just visit ******** or **********.site (not .com)

Crimson_Assassin
Crimson_AssassinLv12

It’s a harem? How, I thought time was frozen and MC was the only one not frozen

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:I don't like that book it's trash to me and plus it's a harem
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3
Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3Lv10

I'm talking about EEIAR

Crimson_Assassin:It’s a harem? How, I thought time was frozen and MC was the only one not frozen
Crimson_Assassin
Crimson_AssassinLv12

Oh ok thanks

Mans_1_Not_2_Hot_3:I'm talking about EEIAR
Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

Shiet it's censored. But if you just google the novels name you can find the blocked chapters.

emry:fellow daoist if you ever wanna read the locked just visit ******** or **********.site (not .com)
melodrama
melodramaLv5

Visit boxnovel.com or ********** to read it for free

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Heretoc
HeretocLv4

The story is absurd. I am currently at chapter 110 and all I can say is this story is a waste of brain cells. Not going to suggest this story to anyone. It starts with a scenario similar to Everyone else is a returnee. But that's it. The story just goes off tangent and stops making any sense. To give you an idea I will briefly explain what the **** has me ranting about. MC is a loner invisible guy. Time stops and he is left alone. He spends 300 years acting as an idiot. Instead of training his skill or enjoying himself, all you find him is crying about his past and how he seems to forget everything. Fine. We can understand that MC is depressed and so on. But 300 years? And let's not forget all the time skips. Author just out of nowhere drops a time skip. 10 yeast passed, they practiced for 20 years...it's annoying. And then you have the author mucking about. She's trying for comedic effects, but he is trying so hard that all that comes out is depression. God Realm where the arc stops making any sense. It's so wrong....I don't even know what to say. You have mind locks, NPCs and other stuff which just DO NOT merge well into the story. And when people do come alive the story just goes bat **** insane. Do you remember how hard was it to find magic stones? Well, the story starts and you have 'The player who first entered the game.' Do you get it? Player who entered the game. You don't have people awakening and then hyperventilating because every thing is wrong. Nope. It's a game . The first player than purchases magic stones, few million magic stones mind you. WTF? Are you writing a VR game novel or are you talking about real world. You don't have anyone rioting, crying, screaming. No cults preaching Apocalypse. No military efforts to bring every thing in control. No common man trying to kill himself because he just list everything. Nope. It's just another day. Everything is normal. People immediate adapted to this whole fucking game world. You already have guild and villages. Hunters using mechas and what not. Like seriously? If all you wanted was a game world then why didn't the **** you just created a VR novel. No sense of realism. And if that wasn't enough. The same MC who was crying for his crush and his parents, didn't even think about visiting them. It's not like I wish he would. But what's with all this inconsistent character development. After chapter 100, when people awaken, the MC starts acting like an NPC. Which honestly makes no sense. If it was like they legendary Mechanic where he acted like NPC to earn benefits, I could under. But this ...rubbish. All I cay say is : Waste of time. It's just around 250 chapters long but I was already feeling drowsy 100 chapters in. The stupid change was just the final hammer. Not going to suggest this story. Ever.

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