Review Detail of Overlord_Venus in Psychic Parasite
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Hello folks, Author here :) I finally decided to follow our tradition here in WN, hahaha. Updates will be 2 chappies per day, unless I am not feeling well (which is true at the time of posting this review). Chapter length averages around 1900 words (as of chapter 107). Coming to the story, I would like to tell you a few things. 1) The pace of the story is slow as I give attention to many things. But, as we go into the story, the pace picks up a little. 2) World background is detailed, I can say this with a lot of confidence. I have been fleshing out intricate bits since the beginning, taking measures to not make it overwhelming to the readers. After all, I too was a reader(A reader in WN since 2017) for more than 5 years before becoming an author, so I know the information retaining capacity of a reader, which is very less in WN (since each of you probably read 20 other stories). 3) The characters each will have their own life. Sure, there might be many of them that you wouldn't like (Since the setting of the story is like that) but in such cases, try to put yourselves in their shoes and see if their character is justified. Welp, reading experience matters haha. 4) The English language...well, no one has complained about it till now. So, I presume I am doing a fair enough job in that regard. 5) My MC...well, he has lots of issues, so much so that he at times makes decisions that are kind of radical. Well...parasites. 6) The story has a dark vibe. The world revolves around parasites so, it is not exactly a knight and shining example of bravery, justice, camaraderie, etc. The tone is realistic; meaning, the events will occur similar to if the world existed IRL. But, you will also have many heartwarming moments, familial relationships, etc. I won't spoil anymore but, let me end it with a small note. "There will neither be any instant gratification in the story nor a grandpa in a ring or a stone picked up on the street possessing heaven-defying capabilities, sword spirit, great Heaven Void Earth Rending Physique, etc." Oof, on another final note, please don't spam reviews, especially the troll ones. I can take criticism any day (Sure, I will be affected by them. I only said I can take criticism; I never said I am immune to them) but please use a neutral tone if possible. If you are leaving a lower star rating, do specify the parts that led you to make the decision. This will help me improve. But, just because I don't delete reviews doesn't mean you can take advantage of it. Leave me lengthy reviews if possible, I have a thing for them haha. **. I read all comments (Chapter comments included) and also boast a sound memory. So, I'll know... :P
Psychic Parasite
Overlord_Venus
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zork:Almost catch up to latest chapters. Till now your novel captivates by its originality and solid plot! I like the personality(ies) of the protagonist and antagonist (?) Great job, keep going, don't let us down ✌✊
It depends on the type of people, their place of birth, and their life experiences. Moreover, the context of the situation also affects the contents of a conversation. Slice of Life type conversations only exist when they are making casual talk, which is hardly written in this book. Since most of the dialogues follow the context, the contents conform to the setting.
0525314717166:it’s pretty interesting but the way the characters talk is really weird. they’re way too descriptive sometimes and it sounds unnatural because that’s not how people normally converse
BrianGallacher7:I haven't read it yet but synopsis said he is trying to get back to his time After all that happens to him when he gets back is him getting back the thing that causes the apocalypse because he brought something back with him If so then is this one of those bootstrap paradoxes
Wow, thank you for such amazing words~!!! <3 <3 <3 This book is contracted to WN, so I can no longer try to publish it traditionally. I will try for my subsequent books after my skills have improved further.
Khavos_Rudd:You should think about getting this thing published with TOR books or something. Ypour magical system is very disciplined; Sanderson level, IMO.
Congrats on your front page recommendations, I found this when I opened my apps and usually I just dismissed it, but I saw a familiar name and it turned out to be you. Haven't read it yet because I'm currently following an original novel and I only read one original story for now for immersive experience, I'll add this story to my list for future read. [img=recommend]
It takes more to get published than a good magic system. granted I’m not very far in the story, but I am very skeptical that a web novel can get published as a book. The styles are just too different. speaking of Sanderson though he’s my favorite author. there’s a lot more that makes him good than his magic systems, but good for you for having good taste.
Khavos_Rudd:You should think about getting this thing published with TOR books or something. Ypour magical system is very disciplined; Sanderson level, IMO.
True that it takes more; dialogues, plot etc all come into it. What I meant by the comparison is how the magic system ties into the universe. Money, food, language, relationships, politics all must be touched by the magical system. Take Mistborn for instance; he does not break the rules of his world just to have the MC do something remarkable or get out of a bad situation. Why i suggested thinking about publishing was because you were similarly rigid with your magic system and had it play a role in all aspects of the society. This is very important because you allow a reader to become immersed in the fantasy world where everything makes sense.
Real_spam_bot:It takes more to get published than a good magic system. granted I’m not very far in the story, but I am very skeptical that a web novel can get published as a book. The styles are just too different. speaking of Sanderson though he’s my favorite author. there’s a lot more that makes him good than his magic systems, but good for you for having good taste.
Would have tried it out if it wasnt premium, considering webnovel likes to only give 50 chapters free on a 1000+chapter novel... would be nice to read but I dont want to have to dedicate a year or more to reading the story sorry, also kind of makes it ironic that you recommend not lightly reading the story when that's all the average person can probably do with it