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Brian_Gallacher

Brian_Gallacher

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2019-07-24 JoinedGlobal
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher20h
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    Story is great so far, I personally dislike the way you have MC break the forth wall "Does anyone remember"

    Ch 138 Ch. 138 Second Task is here
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    Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
    Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher1d
    Replied to XIETIAN

    why have harem why not just casual relationships with a few then when he has found the 1 he stays with her

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    Samsara Online
    Video Games · XIETIAN
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher5d
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    Dropped chapter 8 Currency is messed up got 10 000, but not clear if it's Korean won or USD, owes 10 000 but not clear if it's Korean won or usd MC is an idiot instead of paying of debt goes down the rabbit hole

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    12 Hours After
    Magical Realism · 프롬헬 (FromHell)
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher5d
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    Dropped chapter 2 yes not enough to give accurate review but for following reasons Not clear on if it system or him talking Not clear on how he pays for everything Not clear on amount of land Said he is on a hill how big is the fucking hill for it to be acres of land

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    Elixir Supplier
    Magical Realism · Tangcu Yu
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher5d
    Replied to celefoata_

    Hi author a request could you translate I'm in Hollywood But remove most if not all the pointless wish fulfillment ***

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    Unrivaled Medicine God
    Eastern Fantasy · Feng Yise
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher5d
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    I'm annoyed the MC hasn't 1ade pills for hisother and father 2 written a couple books about pills to assist his father in improving

    Ch 19 Conspiring
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    Unrivaled Medicine God
    Eastern Fantasy · Feng Yise
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher5d
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    I didn't read it, length of synopsis which is meant to be a brief introduction is way to long puts myself of reading it. That is why I say 1 for writing quality, since I didn't read it gave a 3 for everything else

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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher5d
    Commented

    Is mc reincarnated already or about to be

    Ch 1 I Will Be Back!
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    Ace of the Dragon Division
    War&Military · Dust Wind
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher5d
    Commented

    If you upload a picture or map on another site that would be good

    Ch 1 Journey
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    Out of Space
    Sci-fi · Neobear
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher5d
    Commented

    Interesting start, got confused by all the weapons and their respective locations.

    Ch 1 Journey
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    Out of Space
    Sci-fi · Neobear
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher6d
    Replied to Brian_Gallacher

    don't let my negativity affect your writing though, keep going

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    Return of the last survivor
    Martial Arts · ShadowMagus
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher6d
    Replied to Brian_Gallacher

    author if you wrote a story with say 300 chapters but didn't catch readers attention due to certain things at start. but claim that if they read to chapter 281 it will be explained why would they continue reading I personally hoped for something like tales of demons and gods with focus on MCs progression MC is already op in comparison, MC is to domineering (a negative ) just because he is suffering from post traumatic stress with visions of what could happen

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    Return of the last survivor
    Martial Arts · ShadowMagus
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher6d
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    dropping at chapter 3 yes not enough to give accurate review that's why 3 stars issues 1. time skips results in lack of depth for your characters 2.calling your boss mafia boss is idiotic 3. knowing your bodyguard is one thing knowing he was once an assassin is another. plausible deniability 4. MC choosing angel race or whatever, you said that Hans was the best due to adaptability, being angel means being enemies with demon which decreases forms of profit

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    War Online
    Video Games · Snowstar
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher6d
    Commented

    the time skips at start results in a lack of depth for your characters

    Ch 2 Entering the game
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    War Online
    Video Games · Snowstar
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher6d
    Commented

    issues calling your boss the Mafia boss is idiotic the time skips are to many and to frequent

    Ch 2 Entering the game
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    War Online
    Video Games · Snowstar
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher6d
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    Dropped at chapter 13 due to inconsistences and idiocy Inconsistent Said it was challenging to achieve the rank she did and she was heaven defying for doing it in 5 days. Then says it's easy to achieve that Said their was 2 paths 1 for body strengthening 1 for mental powers, goes on to say their are half a dozen paths to chose from when you reach 6th stage. Said can only be 1 or the other for cultivation (for some reason not called cultivation) but then goes on to say you can have both until the 6th level where you chose Said you don't get to chose your path it's chosen for you through natural talent goes on to say you choose. Idiocy Not calling cultivation cultivation Way MC progressed to the level she achieved with some guidance MC was a thief but now expect readers to believe that she can fight her relatives in physical confrontation without experience against opponents with years of experience ( not happened yet but will) Positive Author had her steal 2 purses

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    The Good-for-Nothing Seventh Miss
    Fantasy Romance · North Night
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher6d
    Commented

    This chapter just disregarded your previous work author You said it was difficult for those other two to get where they did but only took her 5days now you are saying it is easy Earlier you said their are only 2paths now you are saying their are more stop being retarded

    Ch 12 Placing Righteousness Before Family (3)
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    The Good-for-Nothing Seventh Miss
    Fantasy Romance · North Night
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher6d
    Commented

    I do hope your MC continues to be a thief lost count how many novels has the MC as some expert but after a dozen chapters thanlt seems forgotten Or her being an expert is only in relation to the realm that he or she was in and is infact an amatur elsewhere

    Ch 8 Vermilion Bird Family (2)
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    The Good-for-Nothing Seventh Miss
    Fantasy Romance · North Night
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher6d
    Commented

    Average at best a story The negatives Your terms for cultivation, yes it's cliche to use the usual but it's an accepted form MCs progression is utterly idiotic, I'd understand if the devil used his own abilities to purge the negative aspects that prevent her from cultivating and all this time it had built up like a blocked pipe getting cleared, but 5 days is idiotic

    Ch 7 Vermilion Bird Family (1)
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    The Good-for-Nothing Seventh Miss
    Fantasy Romance · North Night
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  • Brian_Gallacher
    Brian_Gallacher6d
    Replied to ShadowMagus

    A better story would be fan fiction of the walking dead

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    Return of the last survivor
    Martial Arts · ShadowMagus
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