The first chapter didnt establish anything about the mc other than that he is lazy and died.... And that's not what a prologue is, the prologue just ended in actuality since you just finished the time skips that establish background. Probably doesnt help your story has almost no detail and the length of all your 10 chapters is probably the average authors 1-2 chapters
Have you never read a story? A prologue is a the very beginning of the story, that offers background and establishes the main characters goals/personality. Most people write it in 3 chapters. you seem to have barely just done that up to this chapter.
Decapitated is specifically a term used for cutting off the head, when you refer to body parts in general for parts other than the head use the terms sever/severed or if it's just a body use dismember Example: Allen dismembered the Demon Lord. He had severed his arm.
If all you can manage to respond to a genuine review with criticism is that pathetic sarcasm then quit writing, you are acting like an immature child/human scum.
Eh **** me author, you are doing something new and I agree with the love interest, now if you had gone with someone similar in personality to Yun Che I'd say probably dont. but I think they make a good pair, and you can always make it a harem with like 1 or 2 more girls later if you choose to do so, considering it's your story
well that's fine I just cant read this story then, because it is redundant and kills any buildup of anticipation when you guys and then they had ***, but then drop a chapter right after detailing how they had ***, kinda defeats the purpose, if you want to make the smut a separate chapter then dont finish off a chapter saying they had *** instead foreshadow that they are getting hot and bother then drop a r18 chapter