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FrightKnight88

FrightKnight88

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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8818h
    Commented

    that's the whole chapter?

    Ch 234 Called Out
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    Stealing Spree
    Realistic Fiction · Dyrem
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight883d
    Replied to DimensionLord

    Aight np

    Ch 10 Chapter 10
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    The Magnificent System of the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · DimensionLord
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight883d
    Replied to DimensionLord

    Literally didnt insult your intelligence but aight put words in my mouth, shows what kind of person you are. Also love how you said I'm should be nicer when I wasnt even mean in the first place. But whatever dude I already dropped

    Ch 10 Chapter 10
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight883d
    Replied to DimensionLord

    The first chapter didnt establish anything about the mc other than that he is lazy and died.... And that's not what a prologue is, the prologue just ended in actuality since you just finished the time skips that establish background. Probably doesnt help your story has almost no detail and the length of all your 10 chapters is probably the average authors 1-2 chapters

    Ch 10 Chapter 10
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    The Magnificent System of the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · DimensionLord
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight883d
    Replied to DimensionLord

    Have you never read a story? A prologue is a the very beginning of the story, that offers background and establishes the main characters goals/personality. Most people write it in 3 chapters. you seem to have barely just done that up to this chapter.

    Ch 10 Chapter 10
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight883d
    Commented

    10 whole chapters of prologue basically this is nice, will the prologue continue for another 20 "chapters" or naw?

    Ch 10 Chapter 10
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    The Magnificent System of the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · DimensionLord
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight885d
    Replied to Crusade_Immortal

    that story was actual garbage if I recall correctly

    Ch 2 The Overpowered Fantasy System
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    Overpowered Fantasy System
    Anime & Comics · CX_7029
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight886d
    Commented

    it's kinda cringe to sprinkle in a different languages words into a story that is in English. If you wanted to write a story in japanese then you should have wrote it in japanese. That's all I gotta say

    Ch 6 JIRAIYA
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    Talent System In Naruto
    Anime & Comics · ravenwings
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8811d
    Commented

    Decapitated is specifically a term used for cutting off the head, when you refer to body parts in general for parts other than the head use the terms sever/severed or if it's just a body use dismember Example: Allen dismembered the Demon Lord. He had severed his arm.

    Ch 81 Killing the Demon Lord
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    Admin of Girls' Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · Remg
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8811d
    Commented

    Wait the stories supposed to be funny? I haven't seen one funny thing yet, maybe you should put it in synopsis that the story isnt serious? Made me come in to the story with the wrong expectations

    Ch 18 New Member (Read A/N at the end, please)
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    Alchemist Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · Bymo
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8816d
    Replied to AvacusXD

    more like way more idiotic

    Ch 3 Year 844
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    Attack on Titan:Last Breath
    Anime & Comics · MeJr
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8817d
    Commented

    quality not quantity, quantity is amount

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: My Wishes which aren’t Wishes
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    Rebirth in Irregular at Magic Highschool
    Anime & Comics · mkoester
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8818d
    Replied to ClearSkySage

    actually left a review which you already responded to

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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8818d
    Replied to ClearSkySage

    Not really, I think I dropped it, I got to chapter 22 but I didnt enjoy it rlly so

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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8819d
    Replied to ClearSkySage

    Aight I believe you, and you aren't wrong so.

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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8820d
    Replied to ClearSkySage

    p.s.

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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8820d
    Replied to ClearSkySage

    Your ** message makes it so that's the only way to read it

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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8820d
    Replied to ClearSkySage

    If all you can manage to respond to a genuine review with criticism is that pathetic sarcasm then quit writing, you are acting like an immature child/human scum.

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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8821d
    Commented

    Eh **** me author, you are doing something new and I agree with the love interest, now if you had gone with someone similar in personality to Yun Che I'd say probably dont. but I think they make a good pair, and you can always make it a harem with like 1 or 2 more girls later if you choose to do so, considering it's your story

    Ch 55 Not A Chapter
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    Transmigration in Against the Gods (AU)
    Anime & Comics · darvom
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  • FrightKnight88
    FrightKnight8821d
    Replied to EternalBliss4U

    well that's fine I just cant read this story then, because it is redundant and kills any buildup of anticipation when you guys and then they had ***, but then drop a chapter right after detailing how they had ***, kinda defeats the purpose, if you want to make the smut a separate chapter then dont finish off a chapter saying they had *** instead foreshadow that they are getting hot and bother then drop a r18 chapter

    Ch 9 Naruto X Tights
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    Universal Turmoil (Naruto x DBS X Marvel)
    Anime & Comics · EternalBliss4U
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