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Khavos_Rudd

Khavos_Rudd

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2018-02-23 JoinedKenya
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd26d
    Replied to RAGNAROK_Ravella

    Just like the rest of her team is over the top in their behaviour, just so is she in her seeming niceness. Character and behaviour go hand-in-hand; her behaving as if Arnold's treatment was unreasonable would mean that her character is such that she would not stand by such behaviour from her team mates. Is this a one-off thing going on here? The MC already said it was normal. The MC knowing her name and that of everyone else means they have worked together before. If the treatment he recieved is the norm, why is she suddenly jumping out and all that? The behaviour is off inn my opinion.

    "What are you doing?" The team's healer said spiriting towards Arnold.
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    The Rise Of A Porter
    Fantasy · AkshatArpit
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd27d
    Commented

    Targaryen trio eh?

    Ch 19 Leaving the Mountain
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    Taoist Antecedent of the Yellow Court
    Video Games · Bewitching Hua Wuque
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd1mth
    Commented

    For Dao Lord Dark North!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: The child found in snow
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    Gaming Sword Magician
    Fantasy · Lazy_leon
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd1mth
    Commented

    If things proceed at this pace, Zhi Ruo will have soent more time in Qin's arms than our MC's

    Ch 71 Another Restaurant Destroyed part 2.
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    Blue Star Cultivator
    Fantasy · amazingfabs
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd1mth
    Commented

    I hope the author remembers to have him act like a millenia old powerhouse and not like some anime nonsense

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Nostalgia and status
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    The Legacy System
    Fantasy · crazy_immortal
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd1mth
    Commented

    2 iron rank 7 monsters are worth 1gold???

    Ch 138 Solo Adventure
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    Black Onyx: Forgotten Magic
    Fantasy · GoldenShadow
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd2mth
    Commented

    "Frost Spike!" The moment the Undead Knight heard the little Dungeon Dweller voice out her skill, he knew she was done. Quickly, he took a massive step backward even as the atmosphere in the immediate area dropped to freezing point. Smirking as the girl froze in place with a constipated look on her face as she waited for the five seconds for the skill to power up, he casually walked up to her and speared his own lance right into the idiot's heart. Looking up, he nodded to the Summoner looking on in amusement. Link lumbered down to the killing floor and shrugged as the girl's lifeforce slowly withered. When the teacher approached thinking to use her skill, he held her back. "She would have been a bother later on. Best weed out those like her early." Shocked, the teacher took a step backwards in horror at the words entering her ears. "Sigh!" Link was forced to pinch the area between his eyes. "Look...you are a priest. An extremely valuable one. You should just sit in the corner and pop up when I need you, ok?" The author, suddenly caught off-guard by his 3 year old daughter suddenly demonstrating better skils at plot writing than he could, felt his heart skip a beat. A thought skittered across his mind even as the electrical signals sending to the biological pump seemed to skip one beat too many. 'Maybe I could chain her to this desk and have her generate coins for me? Have to deal with the mother though...' As he mused, a sudden cold fell across his nape as he realized that it was not his thoughts he was thiking, but rather that the words looked familiar. too familiar...as if he had just recently read them somewhere. Looking across the room, he noticed the toddler with her suckee gazing adorably at him. Suddenly, the room spinned. As the light slowly drained from his eyes, a sudden thought...one last one, flashed through; does toddler-kun count? The next moment he opened his eyes, theshock was too unbearable and once more, as the electricity sputtered, a thought crossed his mind; "tofu?! Why????"

    "Frost Spike!"
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    Doomsday Online: Supreme Blessing
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd2mth
    Replied to Milarch_315

    That's what'S disturbing you, huh?

    Ch 8 Demon Sealing Arrow Luo Xingyao
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    Doomsday Online: Supreme Blessing
    Magical Realism · Jixia Academy's Half-Step Gentleman
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd2mth
    Commented

    The author is just trolling the freebie genre. Dnt take it too seriously.

    Ch 6 Luxurious Attributes
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    Doomsday Online: Supreme Blessing
    Magical Realism · Jixia Academy's Half-Step Gentleman
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd2mth
    Commented

    This young master Wu could actually help the immortal rekindle his zest for life

    Ch 34 Seal the Mouth
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    90,000 Years of Longevity
    Martial Arts · Venerable_Linfeng
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd2mth
    Replied to DiperZ

    ???

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    Tales of the Legendary Magus
    Fantasy · Belg4r
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd2mth
    Posted

    Not a comprehensive review;I just wanted to show the author some appreciaion for what I thought was an excellent story. Qual: Pretty good. The story flows well enough that I did not notice any errors. Updates: Nothing to complain about since I only just saw this story a few hours ago. Dev`p: Pretty good and out of the norm. Got annoyed at the idea of tourneys but this was almost immediately discarded.The tourney in this instance was actually pretty sensible. The School War itself was somewhat irrational - given there is a Vampire-led autocracy on the outside that would imply the Mages need to unite. Plus, the class divide is such that it is a recipe for trouble later on since the disenfranchised will always seek an outlet if they are ignnored too long. I would harzard that the ruling Mage class of those with bloodlines are far stronger than the Vampires and their human minions since the 2 vampires could not take down a single advanced Mage. Plus, the indications of the existence of truly destruction spells like that 'troublemaker' spell seems to imply that such internal divisions among the Mages makes sense in some way since they are in an unassailable position. Char: Pretty ok. I am not comfy with some of the decisions he has adopted,but this is a difficult one to manage. World: Like story dev`p, this is well advanced. We did not see much of the other world they share but the little we did see makes good sense. The Magic world and rules are well thought out and managed. Cough cough... ot good giving out 5 stars...people get big heads you know...would have applied it to the updates section but that would have been unfair... ok, will review this once more a few weeks down the lines...should have something to nit-pick on if only about the number of new chapters!

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    Tales of the Legendary Magus
    Fantasy · Belg4r
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd2mth
    Commented

    are you effing serious???

    Ch 22 James' Decision
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    Galaxy Wars: The Legacy of Light and Darkness
    Sci-fi · ranmaro
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd2mth
    Replied to Real_spam_bot

    True that it takes more; dialogues, plot etc all come into it. What I meant by the comparison is how the magic system ties into the universe. Money, food, language, relationships, politics all must be touched by the magical system. Take Mistborn for instance; he does not break the rules of his world just to have the MC do something remarkable or get out of a bad situation. Why i suggested thinking about publishing was because you were similarly rigid with your magic system and had it play a role in all aspects of the society. This is very important because you allow a reader to become immersed in the fantasy world where everything makes sense.

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    Psychic Parasite
    Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd2mth
    Replied to Manav_Thind

    hehehehe! What you just described about the romane is an upside, not downside! Romance to me should be like what is done in Renegade Immortal; introduce at chapter 1 as driving force for the character. Kill off the girl at end of chapter 1. Keep MC as monogamist as possible. Revive girl at chapter 2000 just as story ends.

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    Extraordinary David
    Fantasy · Melon-Seed-Eating Crowd
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd2mth
    Commented

    what test paper?

    Ch 74 Red Dragon River, Jiangnan Region
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    Oh My God! Earthlings are Insane!
    Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd2mth
    Commented

    I thought the first chant in swahili was a one-off thing. nice hearing one of your languages being used as an exotic.

    Ch 13 The madness of the full moon
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    The Legend of the Mystic God - Pyramidas
    Fantasy · Mujunel_the_Mystic
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd3mth
    Replied to HammadFAK

    Ah! But the irony behind the theme of a guy feeling down at being cheated on while collecting a harem,,,

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    Journey To Become A True God
    Eastern Fantasy · DarkForces
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd3mth
    Replied to Overlord_Venus

    You should think about getting this thing published with TOR books or something. Ypour magical system is very disciplined; Sanderson level, IMO.

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    Psychic Parasite
    Sci-fi · Overlord_Venus
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  • Khavos_Rudd
    Khavos_Rudd3mth
    Commented

    If female I`m out. I am desperate for something to read but not thaaaaaat mulch!

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    Eye System
    Fantasy · Adam_A
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