my review for this novel(im not a hater, contains mild spoiler, I've read till chp 16) caution: read this novel if you doesn't care for faulty power/combat/levelling system and quite brain dead mc the story starts with how apparently weak the mc was. due to reason i'll not say, he arrived last at the school when they are giving free skills for first timer, making mc only get the last skill left that is self healing. nothing is wrong right? it was said that people can train to get attribute points and skills. with self healing, the amount of time mc could train the body is many times longer and receive benefit faster than other people, yet he never does this. mc is actually quite a clever kid, he managed to create an arrow almost as good as a b rank wood arrow by using a c rank wood (cost much lesser than b rank wood) + slime urine which is practically free. he also manage fool the guard by selling the c rank arrow at the price of higher than a b rank arrow. oh so you readers may wonder why do i said the mc is brain dead and the system in this novel is busted right? now here is the problem, the first chapter is showing how mc, a lv0 human fights a lv1 frog monster. you would see nothing is wrong here right? casual fighting monster 1 lv higher than you right? well, all is well until you see mc damages is only 1dmg when the frog deals like 30 dmg from normal attacks. the reasoning why his dmg is so low from the novels is that mc have no attacking skills (mc have benn whining how he have no attacking skill for all those 16 chp). but wait, you would think that stats influence the effect of normal attacks and skills. if an attack skill let you increase damage by 10%, with mc damage(that is 1 dmg), he could only dish out 1,1 damage which is way worse than his self healing which can heal his health for quite a good chunk. so the way i see it, he gaining self healing is way better than having attack skills. but than i notice something, you use magic skill by draining stamina? like wtf!! in the novel mc doesn't even have mana. if so, how the f other people gain mana then? its not like there is no poor people other then mc right? is gaining a magic skill unlocks mana? that can't be because he already have magic skills. why don't mc change his skill to a physical one then? he could always barter with other people for an attacking skill outside the school. honestly, the author is making level gap a big of a chasm. a lv1 monster can deal lots of damage against a lv 0 human is honestly mind boggling. its not like a monster gain 3-5x the amount of stats human gain when leveling up. if his damage is already so low, wouldn't it be better for mc to just chuck rocks from a safe distances using hands or slingshot, at least it reduces his chances of receiving dmg. besides how the hell mc as clever as he was never tried to team up with anyone else? even if he have low dps, he could be a tanker because his self healing. if his class is his enemies, he could go to other class to team up right? its not like everyone is an evil bullying bastards. he could also report to the teacher that he was close to for all his bullying which he never do. you could argue that mc is a loner/introvert but even i as a loner/introvert could report and ask help from others. he also have a very sick sister, which he very desperate to cure. so there is no excuse at all for him not to team up with others. his attitude for not seeking any help in all that condition is honestly just sheer arrogance and brain dead in my eyes.
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This review was written 16 chapters onpy so all of what written in here was a mistake. He didn’t able to reach much i fo about how the system works. Why he assumed that mc using stamina to use skill. Which later explain at the farther chapters. The reason he can’t spam his healing anility and all about what he thought is wrong is already explained at the farther chapters. Well, i appreciate with this review. it’s not the first review that they thought why the mc did not do that or do this. I repeat there’s a reason why. Read farther to the novel to learn the whole truth before reviewing. You mislead the potential reader.
well thx for your reply. firstly, its written that he was using self healing skill using stamina at the early chp (so you cant wrong me for this). cause i only read till chp 16, there will be something incorrect in my review because the lack of info that will be written at the future chapters. but you must agree that his so called tenacity to keep all the bullying for himself and not seek any help when he need the money and strength for his sister sake is so stupid that it borderline insane. at the first chapter when he battles the frog and both at a dangerous position, he got ambushed by a fireball at the back by his classmate who seems to be higher levelled than him. you must know that both him and the frog have low health at the time. can you imagine, he got blasted to the pond (current health 10) and then by chance the frog attack him(-10 hp). his resonance will get turned off and then he cant use it for a month. if by chance he got super unlucky and get attack by the frog once again, he be dead. if that act was not indirect/attempted murder i don't know what is that. i do agree some thing i do write wrongly at my review due to my haste in typing it like the damage if he get 10% boost due to attack skill. his dmg is 11 and the with the boost he get a +1,1 (11x10%) dmg so his attack become 12,1. minus the frog def it become 2,1. overall gonna drop this novel first till maybe there is 100-150 chp
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Well if the first 16 chapters is like this i wouldn't continue for sure. I can't stand MC doing stupid things earlier and author explains it in later chaps. Its just waste of time. Instead of looking for why mc does the stupid things i would rather read not stupid mc.
I appreciate this review saved me a couple of hours, anyways what I hate the most is a brain dead mc or a mc that acts smart in just some areas but extremely dumb in others. (Another thing I hate the most is when authors put some attack, defence, and hp/mp values and do not know how to use them correctly. Like does he have more hp than a frog that’s 1 level higher than him? Why?)
thanks for the warning.... it save me of reading a st*pid MC...
Por lo que leí de tu reseña, la habilidad de autorización es un libro, que hasta puede intercambiar con otra persona. Si yo estoy bien, la habilidad de autocuracion no debería ser una habilidad rara y de alto rango? Cualquier tanque, guerrero, etc quería está habilidad. Una opción es cambiarla por una cura para su hermana.
That’s like saying, read till the end of my story before you can have an opinion on it. This is this persons opinions and criticisms up to chapter 16.
while I agree that maybe16 chapters is a bit soon for defining a book...your response is basically saying, "your wrong and you have to pay me to see if I'm lieing". exactly how far into the paid chapters before you actually started writing more than troup filler?(call me scum 0 chapters read, but the reviews other than this one don't do much to convince)
