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SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv53yr
2021-04-17 23:36

Is it worth reading? Yes. But, skip to chapter 40 and wait till chapter 70 till it gets better. The only thing you miss by jumping to chapter 40 is a small backstory of 1 chapter. It tells you about how he has/had a master who taught him basic sword work and how to channel mana. The last day he saw his master when he came home from seeing him he found his parents dead with a powerful crazy person above them with his sword sill stabbed into their bodies. He fights the bad guy and fails miserably and keeps fighting him to try to keep him away from his little sister. He fails and fails and then they get closer to his sister and she runs in front of him to stop the bad guys attack from hitting him. She then out of no where lights up like a lightbulb and it knocks back to bad guy and he gets scared and says she is connected to people called "Fate" or "Fated". She then gets sick and is sick for the rest of her life. They become orphans. That is all you will miss by skipping to chapter 40. On top of this this LN is 8th grade syndrome and no one dies or at least the MC is never allowed to kill anyone even if they are constantly attacking him and hurting him or trying to kidnap the girl that his was hired to guard. Then even more 8th grade syndrome comedy happens in the LN that probably only the author himself finds funny.

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pacul
paculLv13

phew, dodged a bullet, thanks mate,

BlackRoseDragon
BlackRoseDragonLv15

a book isnt worth reading if you have to skip 40 chapters of the novel. the novel should be good from the get go

SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

I'm sorry that is how you feel. This LN isn't a translation. This is a new author that is new to writing and doesn't have high paid Editors to help them change the way they are telling their stories. This means that they have to figure it all out on their own. I still stand by my Review, it is worth reading.

BlackRoseDragon:a book isnt worth reading if you have to skip 40 chapters of the novel. the novel should be good from the get go
DriftingDragon
DriftingDragonLv13

Im sorry for my fellow dragon’s comment. I will talk to the elders to get him/her kicked out of the Dragon Clan… Such imprudence!!!!!!

SorcererCat:I'm sorry that is how you feel. This LN isn't a translation. This is a new author that is new to writing and doesn't have high paid Editors to help them change the way they are telling their stories. This means that they have to figure it all out on their own. I still stand by my Review, it is worth reading.
SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

lol

DriftingDragon:Im sorry for my fellow dragon’s comment. I will talk to the elders to get him/her kicked out of the Dragon Clan… Such imprudence!!!!!!
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ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6

my review for this novel(im not a hater, contains mild spoiler, I've read till chp 16) caution: read this novel if you doesn't care for faulty power/combat/levelling system and quite brain dead mc the story starts with how apparently weak the mc was. due to reason i'll not say, he arrived last at the school when they are giving free skills for first timer, making mc only get the last skill left that is self healing. nothing is wrong right? it was said that people can train to get attribute points and skills. with self healing, the amount of time mc could train the body is many times longer and receive benefit faster than other people, yet he never does this. mc is actually quite a clever kid, he managed to create an arrow almost as good as a b rank wood arrow by using a c rank wood (cost much lesser than b rank wood) + slime urine which is practically free. he also manage fool the guard by selling the c rank arrow at the price of higher than a b rank arrow. oh so you readers may wonder why do i said the mc is brain dead and the system in this novel is busted right? now here is the problem, the first chapter is showing how mc, a lv0 human fights a lv1 frog monster. you would see nothing is wrong here right? casual fighting monster 1 lv higher than you right? well, all is well until you see mc damages is only 1dmg when the frog deals like 30 dmg from normal attacks. the reasoning why his dmg is so low from the novels is that mc have no attacking skills (mc have benn whining how he have no attacking skill for all those 16 chp). but wait, you would think that stats influence the effect of normal attacks and skills. if an attack skill let you increase damage by 10%, with mc damage(that is 1 dmg), he could only dish out 1,1 damage which is way worse than his self healing which can heal his health for quite a good chunk. so the way i see it, he gaining self healing is way better than having attack skills. but than i notice something, you use magic skill by draining stamina? like wtf!! in the novel mc doesn't even have mana. if so, how the f other people gain mana then? its not like there is no poor people other then mc right? is gaining a magic skill unlocks mana? that can't be because he already have magic skills. why don't mc change his skill to a physical one then? he could always barter with other people for an attacking skill outside the school. honestly, the author is making level gap a big of a chasm. a lv1 monster can deal lots of damage against a lv 0 human is honestly mind boggling. its not like a monster gain 3-5x the amount of stats human gain when leveling up. if his damage is already so low, wouldn't it be better for mc to just chuck rocks from a safe distances using hands or slingshot, at least it reduces his chances of receiving dmg. besides how the hell mc as clever as he was never tried to team up with anyone else? even if he have low dps, he could be a tanker because his self healing. if his class is his enemies, he could go to other class to team up right? its not like everyone is an evil bullying bastards. he could also report to the teacher that he was close to for all his bullying which he never do. you could argue that mc is a loner/introvert but even i as a loner/introvert could report and ask help from others. he also have a very sick sister, which he very desperate to cure. so there is no excuse at all for him not to team up with others. his attitude for not seeking any help in all that condition is honestly just sheer arrogance and brain dead in my eyes.

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