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The Mysterious Black Magician
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The Mysterious Black Magician

Fhrutz_D_Hollow

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What is The Mysterious Black Magician

The Mysterious Black Magician is a popular web novel written by the author Fhrutz_D_Hollow, covering SYSTEM, GAME ELEMENT, MAGIC, DEMONS, ROMANCE, SCI-FI, DEMI-HUMANS, HIDDEN-POWER, WEAKTOSTRONGMC, MODERN FANTASY, Fantasy genres. It's viewed by 1.9M readers with an average rating of 4.58/5 and 94 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 238 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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RPG STYLE NOVEL, MC DOING QUEST, KILLING MONSTERS, LEVELING UP, GAINING SKILL, AND etc... SYSTEM Deity, a newly invented modern gadget that helps humans to breakthrough their limiters. Our protagonist Yman Talisman was a young man, 17 years old, and an orphan. After he found out that he had a Hollow Cell symptom, he rejoiced. Now there was a way for him to cure his ill sister. But on the day of evaluation exams, because of an incident, he was late and only managed to get the weakest magic skill among the rest. How can someone like him fight monster monsters when his magic was the weakest and no use for fighting? No group wanted to let him joined them. In order to cure his sister, he had no choice but to fight monsters alone. When he finds out about a certain item that able to heal any kind of illness, he didn't think twice and embark into a journey. Leaving his ill sister to a trusted friend, he left the city and delves into adventures to search for it. Message me at discord if you have questions and suggestions: CloudSky#4375

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Fhrutz_D_Hollow
Fhrutz_D_HollowAuthorFhrutz_D_Hollow

HI, Author here! Shamelessly reviewing his work. Of course, I rated it for 5. But if you have free time and nothing to do, try to peek and read in this novel. Maybe what you’re looking for is here. The greatness of this novel cannot be found in the early chapter. Every character in this novel is 4d😉. So try and see. Then don’t forget to leave a review. And if you are more than generous, I will be happy and be more motivated if you can drop some power stone or send coffee gifts. I leave it here if you wanted to rant at me: Discord: @CloudSky#4375 BIG THANKS FOR READING!!

godstitch
godstitchLv4godstitch

so what chapter dose it get good. Like an OP mc. Cuz I like it so far but it's slow beyond belief like those books they make u read at school anyways lt me know and I dont mean like lvl 2 I mean like bad ass s*****.

LiLhyz
LiLhyzLv5LiLhyz

The good thing about reading MCs progress through the novel is you get to feel his earlier struggles. It's normal for readers to be frustrated about MCs weakness, but when he achieves the level where he deserves to be, I imagine it would be so much more rewarding. Waiting for that point for this MC. As for writting quality, the author's writing improve as he makes more chapter. Good job author.

ExodusGaming555
ExodusGaming555Lv6ExodusGaming555

my review for this novel(im not a hater, contains mild spoiler, I've read till chp 16) caution: read this novel if you doesn't care for faulty power/combat/levelling system and quite brain dead mc the story starts with how apparently weak the mc was. due to reason i'll not say, he arrived last at the school when they are giving free skills for first timer, making mc only get the last skill left that is self healing. nothing is wrong right? it was said that people can train to get attribute points and skills. with self healing, the amount of time mc could train the body is many times longer and receive benefit faster than other people, yet he never does this. mc is actually quite a clever kid, he managed to create an arrow almost as good as a b rank wood arrow by using a c rank wood (cost much lesser than b rank wood) + slime urine which is practically free. he also manage fool the guard by selling the c rank arrow at the price of higher than a b rank arrow. oh so you readers may wonder why do i said the mc is brain dead and the system in this novel is busted right? now here is the problem, the first chapter is showing how mc, a lv0 human fights a lv1 frog monster. you would see nothing is wrong here right? casual fighting monster 1 lv higher than you right? well, all is well until you see mc damages is only 1dmg when the frog deals like 30 dmg from normal attacks. the reasoning why his dmg is so low from the novels is that mc have no attacking skills (mc have benn whining how he have no attacking skill for all those 16 chp). but wait, you would think that stats influence the effect of normal attacks and skills. if an attack skill let you increase damage by 10%, with mc damage(that is 1 dmg), he could only dish out 1,1 damage which is way worse than his self healing which can heal his health for quite a good chunk. so the way i see it, he gaining self healing is way better than having attack skills. but than i notice something, you use magic skill by draining stamina? like wtf!! in the novel mc doesn't even have mana. if so, how the f other people gain mana then? its not like there is no poor people other then mc right? is gaining a magic skill unlocks mana? that can't be because he already have magic skills. why don't mc change his skill to a physical one then? he could always barter with other people for an attacking skill outside the school. honestly, the author is making level gap a big of a chasm. a lv1 monster can deal lots of damage against a lv 0 human is honestly mind boggling. its not like a monster gain 3-5x the amount of stats human gain when leveling up. if his damage is already so low, wouldn't it be better for mc to just chuck rocks from a safe distances using hands or slingshot, at least it reduces his chances of receiving dmg. besides how the hell mc as clever as he was never tried to team up with anyone else? even if he have low dps, he could be a tanker because his self healing. if his class is his enemies, he could go to other class to team up right? its not like everyone is an evil bullying bastards. he could also report to the teacher that he was close to for all his bullying which he never do. you could argue that mc is a loner/introvert but even i as a loner/introvert could report and ask help from others. he also have a very sick sister, which he very desperate to cure. so there is no excuse at all for him not to team up with others. his attitude for not seeking any help in all that condition is honestly just sheer arrogance and brain dead in my eyes.

SomePeasant
SomePeasantLv5SomePeasant

I wanna like this story but there is next to no story development and frankly there is not a single character that I genuinely like, just ones I dont hate... or well, really hate. I definitely wanna mention that it's fine to have a main character start out weak, but it's extremely frustrating to read a story in which the character is set up to fail and be made a mockery of around every corner no matter what he does. This was especially unfortunate at one point where th mc used his brain to set up a trap just to fail at the last second for a totally avoidable reason that came out of nowhere. In 80 chapters we got one sneak peak into what's special about him and will presumably help him become strong at some point, but even then the focus was much more on how that ability is limited instead of how the mc will build up on that ability. Which I feel is just not enough to balance out the frustration that builds up while reading. Now at the end I wanna say that I do feel like the author is improving and the story might very well get more engaging at a later point but you might wanna start reading from chapter 50 like suggested because before that point it is genuinely jarring to read, not because of grammar or anything but because of the above mentioned reasons.

BlackRoseDragon
BlackRoseDragonLv5BlackRoseDragon

My complaint it that it is absolutely horrible to read. It needs some editing done and many different word choices need to be used. For instance the character said he was ganged up on by 5 youths. Someone young does not talk like that.

hassekf
hassekfLv5hassekf

Interesting, good background and has lots of potential, but the author is still in his infancy when it comes to writing. Info dump everywhere, description of important events are ignored, characters are the most fake I have ever seen. Forced bullying, forced situations, no credibility at all. The Mc is dumb, ignorant of his own powers and is a suckrr for girls. Even the good old cliches are badly done here. The grammar and English of this, is almost umbereable. Needs some seeeerious editing to become readable. But again, is has potential, but the author seems to never have read a good written novel before. Maybe in the hands of a different writer, this can be a good gem. At last, good luck author. Hope you become a hellaof writer and comes back to redo this one. Good luck.

KarmaKalo
KarmaKaloLv4KarmaKalo

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vkg313
vkg313Lv6vkg313

I'm going to be honest. The writing quality is low. Really low. The author definitely isn't a native speaker (or is a child). I can't see any proof of a Writer's Pride when I read this story with all of the constant errors. Not sure if it's worth paying money for this. Has frequent updates Story seems a bit forced so far. Doesn't feel too natural, and we don't know why he is being picked on. If the only reason is because he is an orphan, then you can really see the difference in values between Americans and wherever the author came from. The MC seems to be a complete loser, but this could change in the future. I have no idea, but it's 3 stars for the current MC personality. He's also a super siscon and really dumb, so that makes it even worse. The other characters are currently 2 dimensional as well. World seems interesting, and I'm assuming that this is why many people haven't left already. All in all, if you can get through the writing, then feel free to read. Otherwise, it isn't worth it.

Tytanio_Vielfire
Tytanio_VielfireLv2Tytanio_Vielfire

So long story short is that it has potential but the grammar and sentence building of the story is so horrendous that I developed an aneurysm. If it gets a proper editing than I believe a 4.3 - 4.5 star would be possible. Not discouraging anyone else from reading but for me its a no.

Foxikgen
FoxikgenLv5Foxikgen

if you suffer from insomnia, then this novel will help you regain healthy sleep.......................................................................

JDice
JDiceLv2JDice

I rarely write a review but i have to say very disappointing. I have read worse novels but this really irritates me probably because of the potential i see. Dont waste your time with this.

The_secret123
The_secret123Lv4The_secret123

A good story of MC, struggling to increase his power level. I like stories w powers. Can't wait till he becomes better. Keep it up author! Hiya!!!! 😁😁😁😁😁😁

Swordguy7
Swordguy7Lv5Swordguy7

Story about a weak, ignorant, coward MC that gets bullied. If that was not enough, he has a sick sister. No thanks. No idea why he has awful attributes nor cannot get an attack skill.

ChosenGold
ChosenGoldLv3ChosenGold

(Preface: Only read up to like 28 chapters or around there. )From what i had read so far, there are quite a few grammar mistakes. Grammar mistakes, although annoying can be look passed if the story is good enough. Let me tell you, from what I’ve read, it ain’t. The story and characters are quite bland. The backgrounds of the characters and parts of the story are predictable. The pacing is very slow. The characters that i’ve read about so far have traits and interests in things that aren’t really explained well, or at least don’t have a decent explanation attatched to whatever. Also, a large amount of characters are incredibly annoying, of course that could be changed in later chapters, but i’ve already given up so... However the book did have some ideas like the deity system that had some uniqueness to it. Of course the actual deity the mc has ruins that system for me b/c of her annoying personality. Hopefully the author can do something better in the near future. P.S: Theres a dude that keeps rating 5 stars inflating the rating. Could be an alt account or a bot idk.

ApolloTempes
ApolloTempesLv4ApolloTempes

This story is a good read to try out. It starts off slow then it gets better at somehwere around ch.40. Most reviews are on grammar, all i say is come on humans arent perfect. Most reviews are also from those who stop at the first 10 chapters and havent read the whole novel. Give it a try If your have nothing to read.

Saverius
SaveriusLv7Saverius

I discovered this novel last week and I can't wait to read the next chapters: excellent characters, good story and interesting background. I recommend this original novel to all the fans of stories with school life, magic and excellent protagonist.

Saverius
SaveriusLv7Saverius

I discovered this novel yesterday and i want to give it a chance : the characters are interesting, the story seem good abd the background is good. I hope the story will become better and better throughout the chapters and I recommend this original novel to all those who love to try new novels.

Daniel_Vukelic
Daniel_VukelicLv2Daniel_Vukelic

overall feels set up well. Minor word issues here and there and needs to work on transitions. But tells an interesting enjoyable story. .

DaoistxBrYik
DaoistxBrYikLv2DaoistxBrYik

This story has excellent plot and always keeps you on the edge of your seat to finf out what happens in the following chapters. Keep up the good work and please don’t drop this story!!!

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