Tired_Regressor
"The way I see it, if you want the rainbow, you gotta put up with the rain."
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This is honestly a good story. But seeing the protagonist get constantly compared to everyone else and the people always highlighting his weak points is really tiring to see. It's understandable if it was the first impression, or before he was making waves in Dorne with his groundbreaking ideas that were being implemented. But why does it need to be repeated everytime that he is not the most handsome among his friends? He is not the most strongest? He is not that good in bed?? It's just annoying to see at this point. The worst part is, the people that keep on highlighting his weakness and lesser traits are his family. If it isn't something that is particularly important for the story, such as progression of romance with his future queen or something else. I think it's better not to keep on repeating the same thing.
Author, I'm very sorry to hear that. I know this may sound ironic coming from me. But I suggest not sacrificing sleep time to churn out more chapters. If you have plenty in stock, then it's all good. But you need to take some rest as well, as an amateur writer who mostly posts short stories nowadays. I already feel a bit overwhelmed sometimes when I go too far to please my readers. Sorry for the long rant, I hope you stay safe Author and have a nice day.