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GGMissFortune
GGMissFortuneLv65yr
2019-10-22 13:14

overrated trash. skips a whole lot of possible content (plot, world-building and character development of MC) while jumping straight into an uninspired high school rom-com setting where the *mysterious* MC can bully idiot rich kids

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Rayketsuu
RayketsuuLv3

Having a story based on past events are hard when you try to stay true to actual world events. It’s easier to simply create your own present and future. But I understand what you are saying, but the author do flash backs that play some part into the current story all the time. And the school rom-com aspect hasn’t been in the story for like 10 or so chapters.

Rayketsuu
RayketsuuLv3

But it is also true that he skipped a lot of important times in history and a simple flashback to that time won’t be enough

Rayketsuu:Having a story based on past events are hard when you try to stay true to actual world events. It’s easier to simply create your own present and future. But I understand what you are saying, but the author do flash backs that play some part into the current story all the time. And the school rom-com aspect hasn’t been in the story for like 10 or so chapters.
TianHa
TianHaLv4

shut ut slut go watch some revers harem or ****

BigCheesecake
BigCheesecakeLv15

dude your comment is complete bulshit yes it did skip thousands of years to get to modern times but that's not a bad thing he could literally make a Side Story saying everything that happened from the time he got his invitation to the present day day and I want star is extremely low for the story I would say if you want to close it low class it a 3.5 at least

maelvoid_2025
maelvoid_2025Lv4

I agree a simple side story or two could easily fix this problem plus if you got problem then just explain it to the author

LegendofYunshen
LegendofYunshenLv2

Think you have somewhat of a point, but I'm sure author would appreciate if you used somewhat of a more professional and respectful tone. Also, the main character lived for a long time, and it's unrealistic to make the author make up for all the content. I personality quite like the fact that there's simple side stories that uncover his past instead of introducing him and everything at the start. There's a mixture of flashbacks and the actual story, and that's a difficult transition, in my experience. The author made it somewhat smooth.

Fachi
FachiLv1

Well would you rather a story that slowly reveals important things throughout the story or 200 chapters of the past when 95% will never matter to the reading experience

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TheMothMan
TheMothManLv5

I must say it's good, a very nice story and I'll be looking forward to how it develops further. Now to reach the 140 words needed. All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me You want to know why I feel so horrified I let my innocence die You want to know why I can't be pacified You made me bury something I won't be sleeping tonight I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man You want to know why It seems the passion has died We've all been living this lie You want to know why my Will's been fortified You made me hunger again Good luck sleeping tonight I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me I was too blinded to see All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me The song has nothing to do with the story

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