Fachi

Ah yes 40k, the kings of genetic alteration

Yeah, it seems that magic using dragons are rare but tend to have more powerful magic than other creatures

Regressor's Instruction Manual

I guess that's the authors interpretation of novel MC's being abandoned to a lower realm.

The writing quality is great as always, however the story is incredibly boring. The character's IQ also seems to be incredibly low, very simple ideas and concepts are completely overlooked. I don't know what to say, the story just doesn't have much going on with it, I enjoyed CORNBRINGERS other stories but this one is just pretty bad. Making someone with Black Bolt's powers is somewhat interesting but but it's ruined by the lack of truly interesting events and all the god awful angst that plagues the story. And, because I know people are going to say things like "But-but the character is having realistic reactions for his situatio-" I don't care. Honestly having things like that is fine, but it plagues the story, there is more angst than plot, and just and fyi, angst isn't entertaining. And anyways I didn't come to a webnovel fanfiction to ponder the human condition on a topic that many others have explained in a much better and more detailed way. Nothing really happens in the story, I feel more action from a slice of life story. I think everyone sucking on CRONBRINGER's cob is actually harming his writing, he writes something and then everyone sees a new novel praises him, and THEN reads the story. Another thing, this really reminded me of a Warhammer 40k + Young Justice fanfic called Death Korps of Justice, it just has a lot of similarities, though I will have to say it's more entertaining. I am not trying to be mean, I just want to give constructive criticism to a author who doesn't really get any.

Why are they going for his powers if her never uses them? He wouldn't start then, and how do they know about his abilities?

Idk man but at least I'm not retarded.

I think you can count all those as kinks.

It's not good, but since the author has made me read it for so long I will give him one extra star. I will keep this quick. Maybe. The characters are just retarded, like people say that wuxia characters are always made stupider than the protagonist but this is just ridiculous. I suppose the characters are okay, they're just boring after their arc is over. The story is hella boring and makes zero sense. So to add artificial conflict the MC needs to kill the omniverses' strongest beings, very realistic. And SOMEHOW, the OMNIVERSE is unable to stop some curse, done by a single guy, fully and 5% of it is bled through. But don't worry, because that literally doesn't matter, the fact that he can't use mana doesn't change a single thing about the story, he still uses quirks. Besides, no mana? This is MHA, there isn't any magic, and any quirks like that use stamina since there are no magical forces and everything is based off of genetics. The action an smut. They are just garbage. The action is described so poorly so you have no clue what's going on, and besides the power scaling makes zero sense. He beat Muscular, and later when he is much stronger he says, "I wonder if I can beat Muscular now?". Like what? There is no tension when something stressful happens either, and it's to the point where it is actually cringy, not to cringe at the character, but cringy that the author wrote it in the story. Like we have the classic 'close to death scene', where the MC is close to death but pulls it off. So what happens is he is getting absolutely destroyed, and he is 1hp AND bleeding, but he somehow wins and THEN heals. The only ''good'' parts about the action scenes is when he shows off some ability and all the weebs in the audience cream themselves, but too bad because the author probably nerfed that ability to all hell. A bad thing about that whole goal of being the strongest omniversal being in ~30-50 years is that it means that he should be the strongest person in MHA in like.... 20 chapters? And it's even more ridiculous when he could be grinding to get stronger but he literally does nothing all day. There was a time when he told someone, kind of off handedly, about how he needs to work hard or everyone around him is going to die. But it's like... what bro? You literally don't work hard at all, this is the only story where I genuinely feel like the character doesn't deserve his abilities. And I read a ton of garbage novels so that is really saying something. The smut is basically nonexistent, it was there for a bit, but despite it being a story that should be like ~30% smut there is way too little. So no good plot; no good smut, if any at all; an annoying main character; eventually irrelevant supporting characters; and bad action. This is a real bad look going on here. The one good thing I can give is the fact that he does have some original ideas, not great ideas, in fact I would prefer normal canon plot, but original ideas non-the-less . Semi Spoilers but it won't impact the plot, just appearance, maybe personality, and something like his quirk. I might be a little mean, I ranted about the author a little bit. He also made the character look like Gojo but that's it. He doesn't have Six Eyes (He has another eye power, too bad it's nerfed to all hell), Infinity, personality traits, or his dope outfit. So he just does it half way, kind of disappointing, no, very disappointing. He is in the Hado family and has Nejire's quirk (who somehow awakens her ability at a very similar time to him despite the fact that he SHOULD have used it hundreds or even thousands of times longer than she has. But who knows maybe it's a side product of the fact that he doesn't do anything. Or maybe the author realized that he drastically limited the harem's growth and decided, "screw it") Genuinely disappointed in the author's laziness, all he needs to do is at least SAY he grinded a little, and it's not even that, it's the little things, abbreviations, something, example, etc. I only remembered the abbreviations thing but there are definitely more things you can pick up if you read it. But I wouldn't suggest that. I actually pinky promise you, the strongest of promises, that you might think it gets better, but it doesn't, maybe it will at chapter 200, but I don't have any faith that webnovel authors can really improve. Delete this and I will sweat to keep this up. I suggest you take this as simple constructive criticism, I have nothing against you, I'm just pessimistic so it's a lot easier for me (or maybe everyone) to explain what I dislike.