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theneth
thenethLv14yr
2020-06-05 07:21

I’ve read enough to qualify for a review. So far, the protagonist seems stupid and oblivious to the world he literally has more experience in than any other being alive! Also, the characters seem like extras. Reading a story should make you believe that character is real, but it seems to me like they are only there to make the protagonist seem cooler/badass. Additionally, the plot is a bit . . . stupid. The protagonist makes dumb decisions and the plot seems suited in his favor. Fights happen just because, and the author keeps forgetting they’re in a school. The protagonist based high school off of an anime, which is subordinate recommended. It’s silly in my opinion. The writing is sluggish and dull, and it seems as if it’s being rushed through. Overall, the only time I’d recommend this is if you like dumb characters and world building, or dumb plots that revolve around the character.

The Immortal Mutant Teen

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118 Chs

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Historian must be really lazy to not discover MC whose not hiding at all and doing high profile things. Anways... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.

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