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AinzOolGown0601
AinzOolGown0601Author5yr
2019-10-04 05:36

Shameless author here, this is my first novel, i hope you guys like it. Any serious reviews will be much appreciated, ill try to meet your expectations the best i can, i wont make them a priority tho, its my novel after all.

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MimicReads
MimicReadsLv14

great novel

13th_Night
13th_NightLv13

Can you fix paragraph? It's too long.

Zapotec
ZapotecLv12

Amazing story!!! Don’t know how you did it Thanks for the chapters

anarchyboi
anarchyboiLv3

What are his powers except his immortality?

AinzOolGown0601
AinzOolGown0601Author

Spoilers (maybe): i haven't really revealed his actual powers but hyper regeneration/immortality is just the one he is most known for

anarchyboi:What are his powers except his immortality?
AinzOolGown0601
AinzOolGown0601Author

Спасибо за поддержку :)

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AllGoodNamesRGone
AllGoodNamesRGoneLv13

What language is this??

AinzOolGown0601:Спасибо за поддержку :)
AinzOolGown0601
AinzOolGown0601Author

Russian

AllGoodNamesRGone:What language is this??
AllGoodNamesRGone
AllGoodNamesRGoneLv13

Oh thx

AinzOolGown0601:Russian
AllGoodNamesRGone
AllGoodNamesRGoneLv13

I suggest u put space in between the paragraphs it is easier to read that way (In my opinion)

rishit1
rishit1Lv4

What is its update schedule??

AinzOolGown0601
AinzOolGown0601Author

Monday to Friday

rishit1:What is its update schedule??
InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6

Quick question but what’s the point of going to school when he is an immortal monster that pretty much knows everything mankind has ever created and the world itself since he’s been there at the very beginning

Mason_Bean
Mason_BeanLv3

You're doing great man!!! Excited for each new chapter

Bellanotch
BellanotchLv11

I love this novel. Please keep up the good work.

Eternal_Ouroboros
Eternal_OuroborosLv13

I just kind of realized that Acheron's powers and original background kind of resembles Vandal Savage from the Marvel comics. Check him out, it's pretty cool. I made the connection and I was like "huh, this sounds familiar." Also, did u take inspiration from a book titled acheron and it's by sherrilyn Kenyon? Really great book if you haven't read it!

AinzOolGown0601
AinzOolGown0601Author

I have used Acheron by Sherrilyn Kanyon as inspiration in some parts. One of my favorite books btw. Acheron's immortality is similar a mix of wolverine and deadpool's but without the delay and aging.

Eternal_Ouroboros:I just kind of realized that Acheron's powers and original background kind of resembles Vandal Savage from the Marvel comics. Check him out, it's pretty cool. I made the connection and I was like "huh, this sounds familiar." Also, did u take inspiration from a book titled acheron and it's by sherrilyn Kenyon? Really great book if you haven't read it!
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

it's not updated for 5 days is this still going on? also I see these comments are 8 months to 1 yr old that means novel was on hiatus previously?

AinzOolGown0601
AinzOolGown0601Author

I've never been on hiatus lol i have been writing for year now. i just update once a week on sundays at this point. so biggest flaw of this novel right now is slow updates.

Nikhil_Chand:it's not updated for 5 days is this still going on? also I see these comments are 8 months to 1 yr old that means novel was on hiatus previously?
Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

based on the author's name Im looking forward to this.

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TheMothMan
TheMothManLv5

I must say it's good, a very nice story and I'll be looking forward to how it develops further. Now to reach the 140 words needed. All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me You want to know why I feel so horrified I let my innocence die You want to know why I can't be pacified You made me bury something I won't be sleeping tonight I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man You want to know why It seems the passion has died We've all been living this lie You want to know why my Will's been fortified You made me hunger again Good luck sleeping tonight I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me I was too blinded to see All my devotion betrayed I am no longer afraid I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man I only wanted a blessing made Now I've been labeled a renegade It seems so clear now what I must do You're no immortal, I won't let them Deify you They view you as the new messiah Deify you Renew belief in some demented man I was too blinded to see How much you've stolen from me The song has nothing to do with the story

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