webnovel
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor6yr
2019-02-02 21:09

Just shameless author review, this is my 1st novel i have ever made and its only filled with my wish fulfillment desire. This novel might not be a liking to some people but hey everyone taste is different right? This is a harem fanfic so for harem hater this is not for u

Liked by 15 people

LIKE
Replies5
WarKing121
WarKing121Lv4

Love your work bro keep up the good work and are you making other novels if you are tell me I want to read them and I support this novel all the way, I love reading this novel I just absolutely love it thanks for all the chapter and all the hard work you put in for this novel and for our entertainment or someting else than that. Bug fan of high school dxd but this is a the best fan-fic I have ever read and also my first too.

rogerven
rogervenLv15

I'm just wondering where did you get the picture from because the art is amazing?

No_Name_1524
No_Name_1524Lv4

author, and salken juga ya, quick question where is the original fanfiction that you've mentioned in first chapter??

Nekomiko_succubus
Nekomiko_succubusLv12

what?

No_Name_1524:author, and salken juga ya, quick question where is the original fanfiction that you've mentioned in first chapter??
No_Name_1524
No_Name_1524Lv4

Nekomiko_succubus:what?
Other Reviews
AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

I love this fanfic. For those of you guys that are hesitating because it has NTR in the description, don't. Like the author said the girls don't f*** the other guys, so it's not that bad. Think of this fanfic as an alternate reality/alternate universe. In the original they lived happily ever after, and in this one they just didn't. If you don't want to hate the original girls, then you should probably not read it because you will. The MC will rebuild his Harem with different women from different worlds. As he trains to get stronger and stronger. The only thing I don't like about the novel. Is when he goes to different worlds, it just takes too got dam long. I understand that the author is trying to build relationships with the future harem members. And like the author said, hes trying not to make it look like the MC is a Pokemon Master. That's just throwing poke balls at the women in capturing them. It's just that he's in a different world chapter after chapter after chapter. Overtime it just doesn't feel like a DxD fanfic anymore. As soon as he starts traveling to different worlds, he goes to one world after another and never really goes back. The author was doing a good job at throwing in dialogue of the DxD world. Like updating us on what was going on with in the DxD world with the MC's disappearance. But so far it seems like he's just hasn't done it since the past couple chapters, and it has sort of lost the DxD fanfic Vibe for me. For me personally I would love less erotic chapters like describing how they're having *** for a whole two chapters. And have less chapters of each World he's traveling to. And throw in more information on whats going on in the DxD world. Another thing is that I don't like that the other DxD characters know about what happened and they hate what the girls did to the MC. But they don't want to punish the girls because they don't want them to suffer, punish them a little bit. Like make the angle a fallen angle. That would have been great. But not much punishment has happened, which is BS in my book. But other than that I love it.

Related Stories