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WitheredWill
WitheredWillLv66yr
2019-02-06 00:50

This is such an awesome fic, although it has the same problems like any other fic, but the story is just that good so you won't mind that problem. For me personally, i enjoyed and hope the author to keep writing it more.

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Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

If you can point out my problems that would be appreciated because im looking for mistakes so i can fix it cheers!

Beretta9
Beretta9Lv5

Yea love the new spin on this one revenge of the perv lol can't wait to read when those cheating b*tches get whats coming to them

CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

What douse it mean by semi ntr

Leixein:If you can point out my problems that would be appreciated because im looking for mistakes so i can fix it cheers!
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

Full ntr is when the love interest abandon mc fully and have s3x with the new guy, but at this fanfic the girls still love mc but just forgot about him then after some time passed they regret and feeling guilty also no s3x done with the new guy...

CliffkunLolRekt:What douse it mean by semi ntr
ApocalipseDragon
ApocalipseDragonLv4

Ele já voltou para o mundo dele ,pra realizar a vingança?

Mandiiyy
MandiiyyLv13

Can anyone suggest me similar dxd fanfic where he was betrayed by the girls.

WitheredWill
WitheredWillLv6

That's hard. My suggestion is, why don't you go to Fanfiction. Net and try to filter for the popular dxd ff in there...

Mandiiyy:Can anyone suggest me similar dxd fanfic where he was betrayed by the girls.
Savona44_Como88
Savona44_Como88Lv1

Read the change of the dragon, it’s were the autor of this fanfict as taken the start of the story, but is a undred time better... Also there is a small problem that there are only 11 chapters ‘cause the autor as some problems, but he hasn’t dropped and he’s making a awesome job, one of the best fanfict i have ever read.

Mandiiyy:Can anyone suggest me similar dxd fanfic where he was betrayed by the girls.
overlord_overlord
overlord_overlordLv4

4manga m68anga party north 965th north ity I manga

Savona44_Como88:Read the change of the dragon, it’s were the autor of this fanfict as taken the start of the story, but is a undred time better... Also there is a small problem that there are only 11 chapters ‘cause the autor as some problems, but he hasn’t dropped and he’s making a awesome job, one of the best fanfict i have ever read.
Daoist549762
Daoist549762Lv2

Good

Plamya141
Plamya141Lv5

please tell me you didn't name Rossweisse daughter as Othinus...

WitheredWill
WitheredWillLv6

you should reply from leixein comments... not mine. -_-

Plamya141:please tell me you didn't name Rossweisse daughter as Othinus...
Eren_Jaeger_2860
Eren_Jaeger_2860Lv1

Am I the only one who read this shit over and over again? It's a mother fucking master piece. Please can you write a season 2 or continue this for like 100+ chapters?

Eren_Jaeger_2860
Eren_Jaeger_2860Lv1

Can you please add screaning time for the others like Camilla , laurent, burst , silent , semiramis, xun er, jasmine and others from the primordial chaos world/ universe

Leixein:If you can point out my problems that would be appreciated because im looking for mistakes so i can fix it cheers!
WitheredWill
WitheredWillLv6

.... you shouldn't reply to my comment bro -_- I'm not the author

Jackson_Alucard611
Jackson_Alucard611Lv14

so he will get all of them back including rias?

Leixein:Full ntr is when the love interest abandon mc fully and have s3x with the new guy, but at this fanfic the girls still love mc but just forgot about him then after some time passed they regret and feeling guilty also no s3x done with the new guy...
LilLegendThe14th
LilLegendThe14thLv4

i agree

Loneee_3
Loneee_3Lv4

to the people who read this novel i wanna ask them a question will issei go back to rias, etc or just leaves them ??

WitheredWill
WitheredWillLv6

he didn't go back to her. it's safe to read, don't worry

Loneee_3:to the people who read this novel i wanna ask them a question will issei go back to rias, etc or just leaves them ??
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AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

I love this fanfic. For those of you guys that are hesitating because it has NTR in the description, don't. Like the author said the girls don't f*** the other guys, so it's not that bad. Think of this fanfic as an alternate reality/alternate universe. In the original they lived happily ever after, and in this one they just didn't. If you don't want to hate the original girls, then you should probably not read it because you will. The MC will rebuild his Harem with different women from different worlds. As he trains to get stronger and stronger. The only thing I don't like about the novel. Is when he goes to different worlds, it just takes too got dam long. I understand that the author is trying to build relationships with the future harem members. And like the author said, hes trying not to make it look like the MC is a Pokemon Master. That's just throwing poke balls at the women in capturing them. It's just that he's in a different world chapter after chapter after chapter. Overtime it just doesn't feel like a DxD fanfic anymore. As soon as he starts traveling to different worlds, he goes to one world after another and never really goes back. The author was doing a good job at throwing in dialogue of the DxD world. Like updating us on what was going on with in the DxD world with the MC's disappearance. But so far it seems like he's just hasn't done it since the past couple chapters, and it has sort of lost the DxD fanfic Vibe for me. For me personally I would love less erotic chapters like describing how they're having *** for a whole two chapters. And have less chapters of each World he's traveling to. And throw in more information on whats going on in the DxD world. Another thing is that I don't like that the other DxD characters know about what happened and they hate what the girls did to the MC. But they don't want to punish the girls because they don't want them to suffer, punish them a little bit. Like make the angle a fallen angle. That would have been great. But not much punishment has happened, which is BS in my book. But other than that I love it.

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