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Arunavazael
ArunavazaelLv66yr
2019-02-22 10:24

So it was NTR? Sorry i dislike NTR So i'll give this novel 1 star Doesn't like it? Blame yourself for making NTR novel And who ever like NTR wish your wive not get taken by another man

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Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

Kinda dumb u just decide its 1 star without reading the content and just judge a novel for its tag, u dont like NTR? Me too. But did u have to leave such useless review and give it 1 star from the get go? I have seen lots of NTR novels out there but I wont judge other peoples work without reading it. I just wont read it if I dont like it. And if u read the other review u should know its not full blown NTR. Its like u judge people just from the outside, u see a black people u judge them right away just because they dont have the same skin color as u. The same as this case, just because other people fetish doesnt match yours u judge them as trash. But hey its your rights to leave reviews no matter how dumb it is, theres literally people just post "dbdhwndbdhdhdbdhdhdndj" and give it 1 star. So ur black? Sorry I dislike black people. So i judge you as trash. Doesnt like it? Blame yourself for being black. Thats how ur review sounded like. 🤗 thx for leaving readable review at least.

ScarletBloodMoon
ScarletBloodMoonLv12

Author, I'm new here and kinda hesitating on reading your novel. I'm really not good with NTR. Is NTR means Netorare or is it Netori?

Leixein:Kinda dumb u just decide its 1 star without reading the content and just judge a novel for its tag, u dont like NTR? Me too. But did u have to leave such useless review and give it 1 star from the get go? I have seen lots of NTR novels out there but I wont judge other peoples work without reading it. I just wont read it if I dont like it. And if u read the other review u should know its not full blown NTR. Its like u judge people just from the outside, u see a black people u judge them right away just because they dont have the same skin color as u. The same as this case, just because other people fetish doesnt match yours u judge them as trash. But hey its your rights to leave reviews no matter how dumb it is, theres literally people just post "dbdhwndbdhdhdbdhdhdndj" and give it 1 star. So ur black? Sorry I dislike black people. So i judge you as trash. Doesnt like it? Blame yourself for being black. Thats how ur review sounded like. 🤗 thx for leaving readable review at least.
ScarletBloodMoon
ScarletBloodMoonLv12

Author, I'm new here and kinda hesitating on reading your novel. I'm really not good with NTR. Is NTR means Netorare or is it Netori?

Leixein:Kinda dumb u just decide its 1 star without reading the content and just judge a novel for its tag, u dont like NTR? Me too. But did u have to leave such useless review and give it 1 star from the get go? I have seen lots of NTR novels out there but I wont judge other peoples work without reading it. I just wont read it if I dont like it. And if u read the other review u should know its not full blown NTR. Its like u judge people just from the outside, u see a black people u judge them right away just because they dont have the same skin color as u. The same as this case, just because other people fetish doesnt match yours u judge them as trash. But hey its your rights to leave reviews no matter how dumb it is, theres literally people just post "dbdhwndbdhdhdbdhdhdndj" and give it 1 star. So ur black? Sorry I dislike black people. So i judge you as trash. Doesnt like it? Blame yourself for being black. Thats how ur review sounded like. 🤗 thx for leaving readable review at least.
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

Hmmm, at early chapter it's semi-NTR meaning Rias and co have a new boyfriend but they never went all the way aka having s3x with their new BF but only kisses. But they do still have feelings toward Issei. The reason why they're looking for a new BF is to gain experience in relationship because they feared that things won't work out later on with Issei because both parties are total newbie in love relationship. So they thought they gonna try find new BF but they fell in love with the BF false facade and starting to forget Issei, but the moment they realize that Issei is gone from their life they started to feel guilty and regret. So that's the mystery of my fanfic. What will happen when they meet Issei once again, but the new Issei is totally different from the old him and when they do reunite again Issei will have like a lots of new harem member. Issei's harem member a few of them are: Semiramis, Scathach, Jeanne d arc, Jeanne d arc alter (And yes both Jeanne is from Fate series not the DxD Jeanne), Yunyun, Wiz, and many more. If you want to give it a try then go ahead read at the very least 10 chapters. Chapter 1-5 my grammar still kinda jam packed but as the chapters goes on its starting to get better trust me 😉

ScarletBloodMoon:Author, I'm new here and kinda hesitating on reading your novel. I'm really not good with NTR. Is NTR means Netorare or is it Netori?
ScarletBloodMoon
ScarletBloodMoonLv12

I hope the NTR is just that. But it's really a bit interesting, I'm not really fan of Rias and the other members. The only one I like in Dxd is Kuroka.

Leixein:Hmmm, at early chapter it's semi-NTR meaning Rias and co have a new boyfriend but they never went all the way aka having s3x with their new BF but only kisses. But they do still have feelings toward Issei. The reason why they're looking for a new BF is to gain experience in relationship because they feared that things won't work out later on with Issei because both parties are total newbie in love relationship. So they thought they gonna try find new BF but they fell in love with the BF false facade and starting to forget Issei, but the moment they realize that Issei is gone from their life they started to feel guilty and regret. So that's the mystery of my fanfic. What will happen when they meet Issei once again, but the new Issei is totally different from the old him and when they do reunite again Issei will have like a lots of new harem member. Issei's harem member a few of them are: Semiramis, Scathach, Jeanne d arc, Jeanne d arc alter (And yes both Jeanne is from Fate series not the DxD Jeanne), Yunyun, Wiz, and many more. If you want to give it a try then go ahead read at the very least 10 chapters. Chapter 1-5 my grammar still kinda jam packed but as the chapters goes on its starting to get better trust me 😉
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

Kuroka will be in the harem, and yes thats the only ntr that will happen. Around chapter 20 ish for lemon scene

ScarletBloodMoon:I hope the NTR is just that. But it's really a bit interesting, I'm not really fan of Rias and the other members. The only one I like in Dxd is Kuroka.
YoungReaperX
YoungReaperXLv5

Lol I know right!

Leixein:Kinda dumb u just decide its 1 star without reading the content and just judge a novel for its tag, u dont like NTR? Me too. But did u have to leave such useless review and give it 1 star from the get go? I have seen lots of NTR novels out there but I wont judge other peoples work without reading it. I just wont read it if I dont like it. And if u read the other review u should know its not full blown NTR. Its like u judge people just from the outside, u see a black people u judge them right away just because they dont have the same skin color as u. The same as this case, just because other people fetish doesnt match yours u judge them as trash. But hey its your rights to leave reviews no matter how dumb it is, theres literally people just post "dbdhwndbdhdhdbdhdhdndj" and give it 1 star. So ur black? Sorry I dislike black people. So i judge you as trash. Doesnt like it? Blame yourself for being black. Thats how ur review sounded like. 🤗 thx for leaving readable review at least.
AraAra
AraAraLv11

Actually I think NTR refers to 3 meanings: 1. Netorare 2. Netori 3. Netorase

ScarletBloodMoon:Author, I'm new here and kinda hesitating on reading your novel. I'm really not good with NTR. Is NTR means Netorare or is it Netori?
AraAra
AraAraLv11

Astaga bro, kau menunjukkan spoiler. Juga apakah Yasaka masuk Harem? karena kau tahu dia MILF panas mungkin juga Gabriel dan Grayfia wohoho..

Leixein:Hmmm, at early chapter it's semi-NTR meaning Rias and co have a new boyfriend but they never went all the way aka having s3x with their new BF but only kisses. But they do still have feelings toward Issei. The reason why they're looking for a new BF is to gain experience in relationship because they feared that things won't work out later on with Issei because both parties are total newbie in love relationship. So they thought they gonna try find new BF but they fell in love with the BF false facade and starting to forget Issei, but the moment they realize that Issei is gone from their life they started to feel guilty and regret. So that's the mystery of my fanfic. What will happen when they meet Issei once again, but the new Issei is totally different from the old him and when they do reunite again Issei will have like a lots of new harem member. Issei's harem member a few of them are: Semiramis, Scathach, Jeanne d arc, Jeanne d arc alter (And yes both Jeanne is from Fate series not the DxD Jeanne), Yunyun, Wiz, and many more. If you want to give it a try then go ahead read at the very least 10 chapters. Chapter 1-5 my grammar still kinda jam packed but as the chapters goes on its starting to get better trust me 😉
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

Mungkin masuk mereka ber 2

AraAra:Astaga bro, kau menunjukkan spoiler. Juga apakah Yasaka masuk Harem? karena kau tahu dia MILF panas mungkin juga Gabriel dan Grayfia wohoho..
AraAra
AraAraLv11

Siapa "ber 2" itu? Yasaka dan Gabriel?

Leixein:Mungkin masuk mereka ber 2
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

Ke 3 3 nya masuk mungkin, yasaka gabriel, grayfia

AraAra:Siapa "ber 2" itu? Yasaka dan Gabriel?
AraAra
AraAraLv11

Ok, lanjutkan sj, gw tunggu lanjutannya, bosan di dunia Evenicle itu wkwkwk,, soalnya kurang tau sama ceritanya,, gw kira itu semacam novel,, eh tau"nya game "anu",, baru tahu sih.

Leixein:Ke 3 3 nya masuk mungkin, yasaka gabriel, grayfia
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

Bagus kok gamenya aku suka haha tapi yah kalo ga tau ceritanya pasti boring. Kecuali mau bener2 baca ceritanya wkwk. Next chapter climax nya kok, sisanya lemon scene rata2

AraAra:Ok, lanjutkan sj, gw tunggu lanjutannya, bosan di dunia Evenicle itu wkwkwk,, soalnya kurang tau sama ceritanya,, gw kira itu semacam novel,, eh tau"nya game "anu",, baru tahu sih.
AraAra
AraAraLv11

Ditunggu saja dah lagian itu Croix sama Silent kasian jadi baper pen di embat, kalau Issei yang dulu sih auto hornie pasti hahaha

Leixein:Bagus kok gamenya aku suka haha tapi yah kalo ga tau ceritanya pasti boring. Kecuali mau bener2 baca ceritanya wkwk. Next chapter climax nya kok, sisanya lemon scene rata2
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

Iya wkwk

AraAra:Ditunggu saja dah lagian itu Croix sama Silent kasian jadi baper pen di embat, kalau Issei yang dulu sih auto hornie pasti hahaha
Limitless_Being
Limitless_BeingLv10

That isn’t judging it’s called being racist and that is bad,I liked the novel but as it went on for ME it worsened. And don’t just go around saying people are black because that isn’t a a joke.

Leixein:Kinda dumb u just decide its 1 star without reading the content and just judge a novel for its tag, u dont like NTR? Me too. But did u have to leave such useless review and give it 1 star from the get go? I have seen lots of NTR novels out there but I wont judge other peoples work without reading it. I just wont read it if I dont like it. And if u read the other review u should know its not full blown NTR. Its like u judge people just from the outside, u see a black people u judge them right away just because they dont have the same skin color as u. The same as this case, just because other people fetish doesnt match yours u judge them as trash. But hey its your rights to leave reviews no matter how dumb it is, theres literally people just post "dbdhwndbdhdhdbdhdhdndj" and give it 1 star. So ur black? Sorry I dislike black people. So i judge you as trash. Doesnt like it? Blame yourself for being black. Thats how ur review sounded like. 🤗 thx for leaving readable review at least.
Limitless_Being
Limitless_BeingLv10

And please don’t say my fanfic and **** because if it was only for you, you wouldn’t even comment that could’ve ignored it but you have to make it worse I don’t get it.

Leixein:Kinda dumb u just decide its 1 star without reading the content and just judge a novel for its tag, u dont like NTR? Me too. But did u have to leave such useless review and give it 1 star from the get go? I have seen lots of NTR novels out there but I wont judge other peoples work without reading it. I just wont read it if I dont like it. And if u read the other review u should know its not full blown NTR. Its like u judge people just from the outside, u see a black people u judge them right away just because they dont have the same skin color as u. The same as this case, just because other people fetish doesnt match yours u judge them as trash. But hey its your rights to leave reviews no matter how dumb it is, theres literally people just post "dbdhwndbdhdhdbdhdhdndj" and give it 1 star. So ur black? Sorry I dislike black people. So i judge you as trash. Doesnt like it? Blame yourself for being black. Thats how ur review sounded like. 🤗 thx for leaving readable review at least.
Limitless_Being
Limitless_BeingLv10

And please don’t say my fanfic and **** because if it was only for you, you wouldn’t even comment that could’ve ignored it but you have to make it worse I don’t get it.

Leixein:Kinda dumb u just decide its 1 star without reading the content and just judge a novel for its tag, u dont like NTR? Me too. But did u have to leave such useless review and give it 1 star from the get go? I have seen lots of NTR novels out there but I wont judge other peoples work without reading it. I just wont read it if I dont like it. And if u read the other review u should know its not full blown NTR. Its like u judge people just from the outside, u see a black people u judge them right away just because they dont have the same skin color as u. The same as this case, just because other people fetish doesnt match yours u judge them as trash. But hey its your rights to leave reviews no matter how dumb it is, theres literally people just post "dbdhwndbdhdhdbdhdhdndj" and give it 1 star. So ur black? Sorry I dislike black people. So i judge you as trash. Doesnt like it? Blame yourself for being black. Thats how ur review sounded like. 🤗 thx for leaving readable review at least.
Leixein
LeixeinAuthor

The concept is the same, and i never said all black people are trash. Thats just an example i use since the review concept is the same. He see NTR tag and immediately call it trash. Its the same when someone racist saw a different race from him, he immediately considered that person as trash. This guy doesnt read my novel and only jusge it purely based on the NTR tag. Its useless and retarded review. And like i said before, u dont like my novel? Dont read it then. Too bad for u its worsened but not everyone have the same taste, remember that. I never said any joke. Ur taking my words out of context as if im really saying black people are trash. Its just an example,

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AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

I love this fanfic. For those of you guys that are hesitating because it has NTR in the description, don't. Like the author said the girls don't f*** the other guys, so it's not that bad. Think of this fanfic as an alternate reality/alternate universe. In the original they lived happily ever after, and in this one they just didn't. If you don't want to hate the original girls, then you should probably not read it because you will. The MC will rebuild his Harem with different women from different worlds. As he trains to get stronger and stronger. The only thing I don't like about the novel. Is when he goes to different worlds, it just takes too got dam long. I understand that the author is trying to build relationships with the future harem members. And like the author said, hes trying not to make it look like the MC is a Pokemon Master. That's just throwing poke balls at the women in capturing them. It's just that he's in a different world chapter after chapter after chapter. Overtime it just doesn't feel like a DxD fanfic anymore. As soon as he starts traveling to different worlds, he goes to one world after another and never really goes back. The author was doing a good job at throwing in dialogue of the DxD world. Like updating us on what was going on with in the DxD world with the MC's disappearance. But so far it seems like he's just hasn't done it since the past couple chapters, and it has sort of lost the DxD fanfic Vibe for me. For me personally I would love less erotic chapters like describing how they're having *** for a whole two chapters. And have less chapters of each World he's traveling to. And throw in more information on whats going on in the DxD world. Another thing is that I don't like that the other DxD characters know about what happened and they hate what the girls did to the MC. But they don't want to punish the girls because they don't want them to suffer, punish them a little bit. Like make the angle a fallen angle. That would have been great. But not much punishment has happened, which is BS in my book. But other than that I love it.

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