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you should really continue writing this i enjoy it lol

it literally says guts template in ancient China thats the title. where did you get the fact about it being the world guts is from?

well system can be a capture system kinda like the goddess capture but it's mixed with both Pokémon and girls. then a training method that cultivates all 3 things at once soul or psychic, iner energy or aura, and body. a pheromone and hormone that also makes the female Pokémon he captures more humanoid. and a inerspace that gets bigger the stronger he gets for his harem and honestly anything else use the system to introduce along the way

and honestly with the system no need for multiverse but you can do like cross over after he dominated the planet and went on a galactic scale finds worlds that you would put in a multiverse

harem and world domination with the goal of peace keeping

I would say tsunade has fire water earth and yang and shizune has lightning water and yang

is it because it's chaotic at your dorm with a lot of sound and people to talk to and bounce ideas off of at the dorms and quit at home?

eh don't stop writing and honestly you shouldn't worry about all that and continue at your leisure

that's wrong and honestly you shouldn't say something like that I was in the marine corps and have ptsd. and suicidal thoughts come up sometimes but I manage it, but it's not easy and you honestly never know what someone is going through and you saying that can literally be the last straw I've seen it happen and it's never a pretty site.

honestly if it was him ntr other people the story would be OK to read but I put myself in the Mc shoes when I read and it's hot but as soon as someone else touched her nope it's done it's a serious turn off and honestly what's the point in having a relationship if your going to allow some other guy have his way with her so instead you should honestly just write a story about tsunade being a slut cause then I can read it but this way just idk really pisses me off. like who wouldn't want someone like tsunade as a wife then you go and throw her around for everyone to have way with no can't do it