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AnesM666
AnesM666Lv146yr
2019-02-09 01:05

Good Job...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐ŸŒฎ๐ŸŒฏ๐Ÿฅ™๐Ÿฅ˜๐Ÿฒ๐Ÿฑ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฟ๐Ÿฅ—๐Ÿฅฃ๐Ÿš๐Ÿ›๐Ÿœ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿข๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿค๐Ÿฅ๐Ÿก๐ŸฅŸ๐Ÿฅ ๐Ÿฅก๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฅง๐Ÿฐ๐ŸŽ‚๐Ÿช๐Ÿฉ๐Ÿจ๐Ÿง๐Ÿซ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿญ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฏ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿฅ›โ˜•๐Ÿต๐Ÿพ๐Ÿถ๐Ÿท๐Ÿธ๐Ÿน๐Ÿฝ๏ธ๐Ÿฅข๐Ÿฅค๐Ÿฅƒ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿ”ช๐Ÿฅ‚๐Ÿป๐Ÿฅ„๐Ÿด๐Ÿบ ๐ŸŒฎ๐ŸŒฏ๐Ÿฅ™๐Ÿฅ˜๐Ÿฒ๐Ÿฑ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฟ๐Ÿฅ—๐Ÿฅฃ๐Ÿš๐Ÿ›๐Ÿœ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿข๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿค๐Ÿฅ๐Ÿก๐ŸฅŸ๐Ÿฅ ๐Ÿฅก๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿฅง๐Ÿฐ๐ŸŽ‚๐Ÿช๐Ÿฉ๐Ÿจ๐Ÿง๐Ÿซ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿญ๐Ÿฎ๐Ÿฏ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿฅ›โ˜•๐Ÿต๐Ÿพ๐Ÿถ๐Ÿท๐Ÿธ๐Ÿน๐Ÿฝ๏ธ๐Ÿฅข๐Ÿฅค๐Ÿฅƒ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿ”ช๐Ÿฅ‚๐Ÿป๐Ÿฅ„๐Ÿด๐Ÿบ

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springtumn
springtumnLv5

Alright..yeah!!?

Yoh3t
Yoh3tLv4

Xd

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Yoh3tLv4

Yeah

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AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

I love this fanfic. For those of you guys that are hesitating because it has NTR in the description, don't. Like the author said the girls don't f*** the other guys, so it's not that bad. Think of this fanfic as an alternate reality/alternate universe. In the original they lived happily ever after, and in this one they just didn't. If you don't want to hate the original girls, then you should probably not read it because you will. The MC will rebuild his Harem with different women from different worlds. As he trains to get stronger and stronger. The only thing I don't like about the novel. Is when he goes to different worlds, it just takes too got dam long. I understand that the author is trying to build relationships with the future harem members. And like the author said, hes trying not to make it look like the MC is a Pokemon Master. That's just throwing poke balls at the women in capturing them. It's just that he's in a different world chapter after chapter after chapter. Overtime it just doesn't feel like a DxD fanfic anymore. As soon as he starts traveling to different worlds, he goes to one world after another and never really goes back. The author was doing a good job at throwing in dialogue of the DxD world. Like updating us on what was going on with in the DxD world with the MC's disappearance. But so far it seems like he's just hasn't done it since the past couple chapters, and it has sort of lost the DxD fanfic Vibe for me. For me personally I would love less erotic chapters like describing how they're having *** for a whole two chapters. And have less chapters of each World he's traveling to. And throw in more information on whats going on in the DxD world. Another thing is that I don't like that the other DxD characters know about what happened and they hate what the girls did to the MC. But they don't want to punish the girls because they don't want them to suffer, punish them a little bit. Like make the angle a fallen angle. That would have been great. But not much punishment has happened, which is BS in my book. But other than that I love it.

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