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Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv54yr
2020-09-22 11:31

hello fellow reader!you shoud try to read up to CH25 dont mind the negative comment about the mc saying has hero complex because mc save the girl who's getting raped and in chapter25 u will know why mc save the 2 collage girl.(sorry for my english)

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Ethan_Polmo
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I agree with this and for Fellow reader who agree with this as well u should like this so it make to top of review

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